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ldinternet · 06-03-2003, 08:55 PM

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mammy · 06-03-2003, 11:03 PM

you design have to sell so dance from that point

theWatsonian · 06-04-2003, 12:11 AM

"We got enough to get you off, you perverted fuck!"

That usually works for me.

chuk · 06-04-2003, 12:45 AM

How do you expect to make money in this biz if you need someone to hold your hand through the whole process?

Basic human psychology is the guide to making a sell, and if you can't figure this out you should give up.

Not trying to be an ass. Just my

smack · 06-04-2003, 01:25 AM

make your frame little bigger. center it in your html file. get some more content to put on there. watch the justifacation on your text in the middle, you might wan to try to just center each new paragraph. watch your capitalization too. you don't need to capitalize the first letter of every word. just the ones you want to call attention to. you've got alot of negative space at the top and bottom. maybe try sliding the NY party girls logo up and making it larger to fill in the space. possibly place a slogan below it. add some small graphics like a picture of a disco ball. or something people might identify with a club just to break up the design a little bit. and maybe in that blue space at the bottom where you have nothing place a few thumbnail sized photos to showcse some more of your content for the site.

lil2rich4u2 · 06-04-2003, 04:19 PM

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Originally posted by smack
make your frame little bigger. center it in your html file. get some more content to put on there. watch the justifacation on your text in the middle, you might wan to try to just center each new paragraph. watch your capitalization too. you don't need to capitalize the first letter of every word. just the ones you want to call attention to. you've got alot of negative space at the top and bottom. maybe try sliding the NY party girls logo up and making it larger to fill in the space. possibly place a slogan below it. add some small graphics like a picture of a disco ball. or something people might identify with a club just to break up the design a little bit. and maybe in that blue space at the bottom where you have nothing place a few thumbnail sized photos to showcse some more of your content for the site.

awsome feedback and advice, i agree with it all.

Thanks man.

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06-04-2003, 12:45 AM	#54
chuk Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: WI Posts: 682	How do you expect to make money in this biz if you need someone to hold your hand through the whole process? Basic human psychology is the guide to making a sell, and if you can't figure this out you should give up. Not trying to be an ass. Just my