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03-07-2006, 02:49 PM
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id like some feedback on my first designs
and some advices too. tnx
  
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03-07-2006, 02:58 PM
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critics advices please
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03-07-2006, 03:04 PM
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looks nice for me
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03-07-2006, 03:20 PM
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Hey you all, give Bary some feedback, I let him do these for me for free so he could build up a portfolio
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03-07-2006, 03:46 PM
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jeez, someone critque this shit...LOL
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03-07-2006, 03:48 PM
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too many gradient glows and drop shadows.
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03-07-2006, 04:05 PM
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Overall not bad for a first effort.
I'd swap out some of the fonts, though. They look somewhat dated and kinda' retro. And I agree with the other comment about the drop shadows being somewhat over-used. Pink text on pink background is a little difficult to read. And the compositing needs some additional work in places (dark blue background showing through the model's hair in one of the pics near the bottom). Seen worse over the years. A little tweak and polish and it'll be better. Just my  |
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03-07-2006, 05:55 PM
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not bad for your first
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03-07-2006, 09:42 PM
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tnx guys
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