My old tour vs. my new tour - GoFuckYourself.com

memphismonroe · 05-16-2007, 11:36 PM

Hey everyone. As alot of you know, I just launched my website not too long ago. After a few weeks, I got really depressed with my tour page and didnt think it was actually reaching out and pulling people in, so I wanted to get your opinion and poll the question.

Which site tour do you perfer! All criticism or compliments are wlecome.

First tour : http://www.memphismonroe.com/main.php

Updated tour we are finishing :

http://www.memphismonroe.com/new/mainnewretrysliced.php

aico · 05-16-2007, 11:39 PM

The first one I like better, would fix a few things here and there, but both are good, just the first one is the better for me.

heymatty · 05-16-2007, 11:48 PM

I like the general feel of #1 better.

That big block of text is too long. Its very hard to read.

You need to put more hardcore action on page 1. Current page is a bit boring.

Adam_M · 05-17-2007, 12:01 AM

I voted for 1

05-17-2007, 12:02 AM

I like the first one better but they are both fine.

ADL Josh · 05-17-2007, 07:50 AM

they both look pretty good but the first one is what i would go with.

Elli · 05-17-2007, 07:58 AM

The first one is much easier to read. You could try breaking the text information into smaller blocks around the graphics more. Or add a collage of photos instead of one large picture.

Angelo22 · 05-17-2007, 08:05 AM

I prefer the first one.... =)

But if fixed, the second one can also look better

memphismonroe · 05-17-2007, 08:08 AM

angelo, what do you think the 2nd one should have to be fixed?

Wizzo · 05-17-2007, 08:14 AM

Both have to much text and not enough pics...

Jamie James · 05-17-2007, 08:47 AM

I don't understand why you want to change it, the first one is way better!!

Angelo22 · 05-17-2007, 08:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by memphismonroe

angelo, what do you think the 2nd one should have to be fixed?

Well... look at it this way:
First page
-On the first one, when you just clicked on it,
it takes you to a page where the first thing you see is a relatively big pic of you with a horny face and a hot ass in the air (not to mention the very nice quality compared to the second preview one)
Interest points: +1
-While the second one, shows text right away, and a little video on a side, while you have to scroll down before seeing some pics, and they arent of a great quality (i mean, the girl is of quality

but the picture seems blurry and of low resolutions)
Interest points: 0
-Text on both previews are like a wall... add some < br >'s betweemn the paragraphs =)

Page 2
-Once again, the new layout has no pictures. Sure, it has the little video again and some thumbs, but also the old one has them, and it has something more that turns people one more: a pic of you

Page 3
-Low resolution pic on new preview
(and i dont really like that pic... you have tons of better ones)

page 4
-both good, but new one has something missing... can you guess what it is?

page 5
-old=too empty, but it has some pics, which is good
-new=too much text...and no pics....

That's it from me i guess =)
And you should use a diffent font on the new one, it looks too plain that way

This critique okay?

MetaMan · 05-17-2007, 08:48 AM

the 2nd one is seriously terrible, i hope you are not paying for it.

#1 is 1000x better imo.

thricer · 05-17-2007, 08:50 AM

the new one is better for me

HowlingWulf · 05-17-2007, 08:56 AM

First one. Needs more thumbnail pics of you. Give the surfers eyes lots to take in with various body parts and poses etc.

TSGlider · 05-17-2007, 09:04 AM

If I'm going to join this site, I want to know the real memphis monroe. Sure, I wanna see super starlet memphis, but i also want to feel like i'm getting to know a side of memphis we don't see normally, the one that's a horny nympho no matter what she's doing, whether she's cooking dinner, playing solitaire or masturbating in front of an episode of Murder She Wrote.

Give the people more hardcore shots, and make them shots that don't all look like you're posing for a magazine spread. If I'm interested in joining this site, I'm interested in the behind-the-scenes memphis. show me a little.

Verbal · 05-17-2007, 10:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EuroDuke

If I'm going to join this site, I want to know the real memphis monroe. Sure, I wanna see super starlet memphis, but i also want to feel like i'm getting to know a side of memphis we don't see normally, the one that's a horny nympho no matter what she's doing, whether she's cooking dinner, playing solitaire or masturbating in front of an episode of Murder She Wrote.

Give the people more hardcore shots, and make them shots that don't all look like you're posing for a magazine spread. If I'm interested in joining this site, I'm interested in the behind-the-scenes memphis. show me a little.

Best advice yet. "Look" of a site is great, but content is KING!

View Poll Results: Which Tour do you perfer
Dark, Black, and pink (tour option 1)	9	81.82%
Blue and Pink (2nd tour option)	2	18.18%
Voters: 11. You may not vote on this poll

05-16-2007, 11:48 PM	#3
heymatty Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Scottsdale :) Posts: 2,188	I like the general feel of #1 better. That big block of text is too long. Its very hard to read. You need to put more hardcore action on page 1. Current page is a bit boring. __________________ Cashlantis ~ Black Book Cash

05-17-2007, 12:01 AM	#4
Adam_M Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 3,800	I voted for 1 __________________ DiscountedPorn.Com ReviewedPorn.com

05-17-2007, 07:50 AM	#6
ADL Josh Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 3,026	they both look pretty good but the first one is what i would go with. __________________ ICQ: 395-433-632

05-17-2007, 07:58 AM	#7
Elli Reach for those stars! Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 17,991	The first one is much easier to read. You could try breaking the text information into smaller blocks around the graphics more. Or add a collage of photos instead of one large picture. __________________ email: [email protected]

05-16-2007, 11:36 PM	#1
memphismonroe Confirmed User Join Date: May 2007 Location: Louisville Posts: 100	My old tour vs. my new tour Hey everyone. As alot of you know, I just launched my website not too long ago. After a few weeks, I got really depressed with my tour page and didnt think it was actually reaching out and pulling people in, so I wanted to get your opinion and poll the question. Which site tour do you perfer! All criticism or compliments are wlecome. First tour : http://www.memphismonroe.com/main.php Updated tour we are finishing : http://www.memphismonroe.com/new/mainnewretrysliced.php __________________ My new network AdultStarProfits.com is a great new place for webmasters to make alot of money. http://www.adultstarprofits.com for all the tools you needed to get started

05-16-2007, 11:39 PM	#2
aico Moo Moo Cow Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Washington State Posts: 14,748	The first one I like better, would fix a few things here and there, but both are good, just the first one is the better for me.

05-17-2007, 12:02 AM	#5
JaneB Guest Posts: n/a	I like the first one better but they are both fine.

05-17-2007, 08:05 AM	#8
Angelo22 Writer Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 3,123	I prefer the first one.... =) But if fixed, the second one can also look better __________________ MAKE MORE MONEY FROM YOUR WEB TRAFFIC - 15% BONUS And contact me if you need high quality translating and writing work done - angelo22 (AT) gmail (DOT) com

05-17-2007, 08:08 AM	#9
memphismonroe Confirmed User Join Date: May 2007 Location: Louisville Posts: 100	angelo, what do you think the 2nd one should have to be fixed? __________________ My new network AdultStarProfits.com is a great new place for webmasters to make alot of money. http://www.adultstarprofits.com for all the tools you needed to get started

05-17-2007, 08:14 AM	#10
Wizzo 2011 GFY Hall of Fame! Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Back in Texas! Posts: 15,224	Both have to much text and not enough pics... __________________ Looking for Opportunity!

05-17-2007, 08:47 AM	#11
Jamie James Registered User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Montreal Posts: 85	I don't understand why you want to change it, the first one is way better!! __________________ [email protected] Visit My website!!

05-17-2007, 08:48 AM	#13
MetaMan I AM WEB 2.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 28,682	the 2nd one is seriously terrible, i hope you are not paying for it. #1 is 1000x better imo.

05-17-2007, 08:50 AM	#14
thricer Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 5,324	the new one is better for me __________________ None So

05-17-2007, 08:56 AM	#15
HowlingWulf Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 1,662	First one. Needs more thumbnail pics of you. Give the surfers eyes lots to take in with various body parts and poses etc. __________________ WP Porn directory/review theme Maddos $35. webmaster AT howling-wulf.com

05-17-2007, 09:04 AM	#16
TSGlider Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 673	If I'm going to join this site, I want to know the real memphis monroe. Sure, I wanna see super starlet memphis, but i also want to feel like i'm getting to know a side of memphis we don't see normally, the one that's a horny nympho no matter what she's doing, whether she's cooking dinner, playing solitaire or masturbating in front of an episode of Murder She Wrote. Give the people more hardcore shots, and make them shots that don't all look like you're posing for a magazine spread. If I'm interested in joining this site, I'm interested in the behind-the-scenes memphis. show me a little. __________________ BaDoink skype: tsglider