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MrPinks · 05-25-2007, 03:29 PM

Want to take a quick peak at what might just be the finish product of my new design? How's it look?

MrPinks · 05-25-2007, 03:49 PM

Anyone???

Yoni · 05-25-2007, 06:06 PM

hair should look like hair
the rest is ok

AaronM · 05-25-2007, 06:09 PM

I'm not a fan of the design at all.

Sorry.

rapmaster · 05-25-2007, 06:17 PM

Well.. I think it's ok but I don't like how the girl's arms and legs are cropped off, looks kind of weird.

But I do like the simple, open and clutter free design.

TeenCat · 05-26-2007, 02:48 AM

hm man ... its so soft or how to say that ... there is nothing what catch my eyes. and those curves, its out few months i think ... anyway its only my designers look, not every surfer know that its out for sure

so put there more contrast for sure!

MrPinks · 05-26-2007, 03:51 PM

Is this any better??? Didn't get a positive reponse for the other one. I just need someone to create some menus for this one and spice up the text area.

campimp · 05-26-2007, 04:03 PM

i like the second one better.... but i did like the first one...

nice Rog pic by the way.. thats awesome

PinPine · 05-26-2007, 04:10 PM

No idea what you planning to do with the site, but to be honest, I like the first one better.....But it's a good idea to see what the rest thinks of it. Never pick something you like, but what the mainstream likes, cause that's what your focusing on. Good luck with your design.

MrPinks · 05-26-2007, 05:05 PM

Thanks for the input. I really appreciate it. You hit it on the money when you said it's good to get opinions. That's what I am trying to do. hopefully, I'll get more responses.

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Originally Posted by PinPine

No idea what you planning to do with the site, but to be honest, I like the first one better.....But it's a good idea to see what the rest thinks of it. Never pick something you like, but what the mainstream likes, cause that's what your focusing on. Good luck with your design.

Mutt · 05-26-2007, 05:46 PM

first one is nice - that trendy style is overused right now but i can't say much cuz i'm designing a site now in a similar style. The crops of the girl's arms and legs are horrible - looks like she is a quadruple amputee.

lucas131 · 05-27-2007, 04:29 AM

In first one thsi carton have strange shades, second looks much better.

drowsy · 05-27-2007, 06:52 AM

looks nice

Dshady · 05-27-2007, 06:56 AM

Replace the "sketch" girl in the first one with her real pic and you've got a winner.

05-25-2007, 03:29 PM	#1
MrPinks Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: FL Posts: 1,767	sneak peak - design critique Want to take a quick peak at what might just be the finish product of my new design? How's it look?

05-25-2007, 06:06 PM	#3
Yoni Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 846	hair should look like hair the rest is ok __________________ See my latest works on twitter.com/yonidesign

05-25-2007, 06:17 PM	#5
rapmaster Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,576	Well.. I think it's ok but I don't like how the girl's arms and legs are cropped off, looks kind of weird. But I do like the simple, open and clutter free design. __________________ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SIG_Sauer_P226

05-26-2007, 02:48 AM	#6
TeenCat Too lazy to set a koala Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: CZ/EU forever! Posts: 16,139	hm man ... its so soft or how to say that ... there is nothing what catch my eyes. and those curves, its out few months i think ... anyway its only my designers look, not every surfer know that its out for sure so put there more contrast for sure! __________________ 6bot / Coming again very soon! Svit Zlin Radio 24/7!

05-26-2007, 05:46 PM	#11
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	first one is nice - that trendy style is overused right now but i can't say much cuz i'm designing a site now in a similar style. The crops of the girl's arms and legs are horrible - looks like she is a quadruple amputee. __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

05-25-2007, 03:49 PM	#2
MrPinks Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: FL Posts: 1,767	Anyone???

05-25-2007, 06:09 PM	#4
AaronM Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: ┌∩┐ ◣_◢ ┌∩┐ Posts: 46,909	I'm not a fan of the design at all. Sorry.

05-26-2007, 03:51 PM	#7
MrPinks Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: FL Posts: 1,767	Is this any better??? Didn't get a positive reponse for the other one. I just need someone to create some menus for this one and spice up the text area.

05-26-2007, 04:03 PM	#8
campimp Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Gamehendge Posts: 1,340	i like the second one better.... but i did like the first one... nice Rog pic by the way.. thats awesome

05-26-2007, 04:10 PM	#9
PinPine Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 385	No idea what you planning to do with the site, but to be honest, I like the first one better.....But it's a good idea to see what the rest thinks of it. Never pick something you like, but what the mainstream likes, cause that's what your focusing on. Good luck with your design.

05-27-2007, 04:29 AM	#12
lucas131 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 11,475	In first one thsi carton have strange shades, second looks much better.

05-27-2007, 06:52 AM	#13
drowsy Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,317	looks nice __________________

05-27-2007, 06:56 AM	#14
Dshady Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In a van down by the river. Posts: 329	Replace the "sketch" girl in the first one with her real pic and you've got a winner. __________________ ***