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bigmack · 07-13-2008, 12:35 PM

www.partyflings.com

this is my first blogsite. anyones input would be appreciated. am i not writing enough? am i posting too many clips and pics? how does it look?

GrouchyAdmin · 07-13-2008, 12:37 PM

I see few links, little writing, and some boring clips. It's like my personal blog but with more tits.

baddog · 07-13-2008, 12:39 PM

Need text, SEO friendly perma links, more text, anchor text, strong tags and some more text.

Deej · 07-13-2008, 12:39 PM

you need to fill it up, give it a look... the default blog skin is bad...

you need links back... you need a ton, but hey... gotta start somewhere - good luck

VicD · 07-13-2008, 12:41 PM

Do not forget to remove "Just another Wordpress blog"

Sebring Studios · 07-13-2008, 12:42 PM

I would change from the generic WP theme into one of their others (under PRESENTATION), remove 'Just Another Word Press Blog' (under MANAGE) and add a couple of sponsor banners. (PRESENTATION>OPTIONS>WIDGETS>TEXT).

I'm sure someone who knows more about catagories than I do will be along to help you out on that part.

It should look good with some fine-tuning. Best of luck.

Michael

CaptainHowdy · 07-13-2008, 12:44 PM

You need a lil more appealing WP theme ...

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 12:52 PM

when you say more text do you mean more writing in the blog post? i have a hard time figuring out what to write.

Deej · 07-13-2008, 12:54 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

when you say more text do you mean more writing in the blog post? i have a hard time figuring out what to write.

your text is essential ... and yes, thats what we mean

baddog · 07-13-2008, 12:54 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

when you say more text do you mean more writing in the blog post? i have a hard time figuring out what to write.

And that is what separates the men from the boyz.

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 12:55 PM

any ideas for conqouring writers block?

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 01:00 PM

so is it ok to make up a story even if it is all bullshit?

baddog · 07-13-2008, 01:02 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

so is it ok to make up a story even if it is all bullshit?

Of course.

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 01:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Sebring Studios

(under MANAGE) and add a couple of sponsor banners. (PRESENTATION>OPTIONS>WIDGETS>TEXT).

when i click "add" i get a teal green bar that pops up that says text onthe left side and "edit" on the other. when i click edit the bar dissapears. how do i add the banner into that?

Supz · 07-13-2008, 01:49 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

when i click "add" i get a teal green bar that pops up that says text onthe left side and "edit" on the other. when i click edit the bar dissapears. how do i add the banner into that?

add the html right in it

kmanrox · 07-13-2008, 02:52 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

any ideas for conqouring writers block?

read some other blogs on google and get a feel what they're thinking, their takes on the scenes they're writing about.. then get motivated and knock it out

GAMEFINEST · 07-13-2008, 02:58 PM

the site isnt loading

TyroneGoldberg · 07-13-2008, 03:05 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

when you say more text do you mean more writing in the blog post? i have a hard time figuring out what to write.

Blogging is all about writing. If you can't do that you'll fail.

Your blog is plain. What are you trying to do? Figure that out 1st.

d-null · 07-13-2008, 03:07 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

when you say more text do you mean more writing in the blog post? i have a hard time figuring out what to write.

not ribbing you much, but it is kind of funny to read around when people say they want to start a blog and then say something along the lines of "you mean I have to write?"

Quote:

Originally Posted by dictionary.com

Webster's New Millennium? Dictionary of English
Main Entry: BLOG
Part of Speech: n
Definition: an online diary; a personal chronological log of thoughts published on a Web page; also called Weblog, Web log
Example: Typically updated daily, blogs often reflect the personality of the author.
Usage: blog, blogged, blogging v, blogger n

Xrated J · 07-13-2008, 03:08 PM

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Originally Posted by baddog

Need text, SEO friendly perma links, more text, anchor text, strong tags and some more text.

what he said

Nicky · 07-13-2008, 03:15 PM

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Originally Posted by baddog

Need text, SEO friendly perma links, more text, anchor text, strong tags and some more text.

Pretty much sums it up

Violetta · 07-13-2008, 04:01 PM

More text and a new theme would help a lot! There are lots of free adult wp themes!!

chemicaleyes · 07-13-2008, 04:05 PM

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Originally Posted by baddog

Need text, SEO friendly perma links, more text, anchor text, strong tags and some more text.

plus a new theme but that's not so important..

when this is done submit your blog to XXX Blog Dir

qxm · 07-13-2008, 04:05 PM

.mmmm it needs.... a big more text, definitively a better theme, more links... and an extra bit of love

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 04:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by baddog

Need text, SEO friendly perma links, more text, anchor text, strong tags and some more text.

Can someone explain SEO friendly perma links, anchor text and i think i know what the tags are. Thats the key words that you put in for each post, right?

d-null · 07-13-2008, 05:22 PM

http://google.com

TyroneGoldberg · 07-13-2008, 05:32 PM

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Originally Posted by bigmack

Can someone explain SEO friendly perma links, anchor text and i think i know what the tags are. Thats the key words that you put in for each post, right?

Read, read, and read some more. Then go about your blog. Spend at least a whole day reading then go about your blog, serious.

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 06:28 PM

typically whats a good amount of writing per story? 2 or 3 paragraphs? or is it the longer the better, as long as it all fits together well as a good story.

TyroneGoldberg · 07-13-2008, 06:32 PM

over 100 words and under 500 is my motto. take my advice you can get all the info you'll need, if you read and research other blogs in your niche.

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TyroneGoldberg

Blogging is all about writing. If you can't do that you'll fail.

Your blog is plain. What are you trying to do? Figure that out 1st.

I know what i want to do. I want to find the easiest way to make a killing in this industry and quit my day job. And I will somehow.

Now that i found out its okay to make up shit im going to try my luck on tomarrows post.

TyroneGoldberg · 07-13-2008, 06:38 PM

it seems you're going for the partygirl niche. when was the last time you went clubbing? what do the girls drink? what kind of music? you can really write this up.

if you write 'this girl is hot and she shook her tailfeather' you'll lose me. you must really write in detail what it's like to see girls out clubbin

bigmack · 07-13-2008, 06:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TyroneGoldberg

over 100 words and under 500 is my motto. take my advice you can get all the info you'll need, if you read and research other blogs in your niche.

thank you.

and to everyone else who has posted so far. thank you.

nexxus · 07-13-2008, 06:42 PM

You need to get rid of the default theme, even if it's for another pre-made skin, try here: http://themes.wordpress.net

bu((aneer · 07-13-2008, 09:57 PM

what is a "partyfling"?

StarkReality · 07-13-2008, 10:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bigmack

Can someone explain SEO friendly perma links, anchor text and i think i know what the tags are. Thats the key words that you put in for each post, right?

Short answer: http://www.partyflings.com/?p=3 is bad, http://www.partyflings.com/pool-party/ or http://www.partyflings.com/pool-party.html or similar is what you want for the search engines. Anchor text is basically the link text.

As suggested, go to some forums related to wordpress and SEO, it's easy to learn the basics in a day.

Ecchi22 · 07-13-2008, 11:35 PM

What others said..

1) Noticed no one told you how to enable SEF permalinks so, go to Settings -> Permalinks and choose something like "Month and name" so you can have http://www.partyflings.com/14/07/pool-party/ instead http://www.partyflings.com/?p=3

2) No empty or "broken" links. Your About page sux http://www.partyflings.com/?page_id=2 its wordpress generated one. Remove it or write what is your blog about..

3) Get some new theme. Default one is overused and seen practically by everyone. Even the surfer knows what script are you running first 2 seconds. And it doesn't look good.
There are lots of free themes out there and you can upload few and see what fits the best.
Of course, the best thing you can do is buy some premium theme ( or see sig, hit me up and I can make you some custom ;) )

4) Use more tags, use categories & add more stuff at sidebar. Iframes, live banners, whatever.

5) Install some fancy plugins that will help you out. There are lots of threads out there, do some research and put what you need.

Try to choose attractive stuff when you post. Maybe I'm not right but this picture isn't attractive at all: http://www.partyflings.com/videos/7-...enshots/01.jpg
I don't think average surfer would like to see that LOL. Maybe the chick is hot but that picture is fugly.

When you do everything mentioned above, start submitting your blog and trading links. Everything else is nice updates with lots of text, SEO work etc.

The Duck · 07-14-2008, 12:46 AM

the theme is default so start by changing that.

Black_Widow · 07-14-2008, 12:50 AM

I like your theme design.
Don’t listen to anyone else. Best one ever. Unique and has its touch.

07-13-2008, 12:35 PM	#1
bigmack Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 329	My First Blog, your input wanted. www.partyflings.com this is my first blogsite. anyones input would be appreciated. am i not writing enough? am i posting too many clips and pics? how does it look? __________________ Party Flings Blog Smokin Hot Hunnies I host with Lessel Web Hosting TrafficHolder.com - Buy and Sell Traffic

07-13-2008, 12:37 PM	#2
GrouchyAdmin Now choke yourself! Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 12,085	I see few links, little writing, and some boring clips. It's like my personal blog but with more tits. __________________ AIM: GrouchyGfy

07-13-2008, 12:39 PM	#4
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07-13-2008, 12:41 PM	#5
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Sebring Studios Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Under the neon moon - Las Vegas Posts: 226	I would change from the generic WP theme into one of their others (under PRESENTATION), remove 'Just Another Word Press Blog' (under MANAGE) and add a couple of sponsor banners. (PRESENTATION>OPTIONS>WIDGETS>TEXT). I'm sure someone who knows more about catagories than I do will be along to help you out on that part. It should look good with some fine-tuning. Best of luck. Michael

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bigmack Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 329	so is it ok to make up a story even if it is all bullshit? __________________ Party Flings Blog Smokin Hot Hunnies I host with Lessel Web Hosting TrafficHolder.com - Buy and Sell Traffic

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07-13-2008, 06:28 PM	#28
bigmack Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 329	typically whats a good amount of writing per story? 2 or 3 paragraphs? or is it the longer the better, as long as it all fits together well as a good story. __________________ Party Flings Blog Smokin Hot Hunnies I host with Lessel Web Hosting TrafficHolder.com - Buy and Sell Traffic

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TyroneGoldberg Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 1,081	over 100 words and under 500 is my motto. take my advice you can get all the info you'll need, if you read and research other blogs in your niche.

07-13-2008, 06:38 PM	#31
TyroneGoldberg Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 1,081	it seems you're going for the partygirl niche. when was the last time you went clubbing? what do the girls drink? what kind of music? you can really write this up. if you write 'this girl is hot and she shook her tailfeather' you'll lose me. you must really write in detail what it's like to see girls out clubbin

07-13-2008, 06:42 PM	#33
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07-13-2008, 09:57 PM	#34
bu((aneer Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 651	what is a "partyfling"?

07-13-2008, 11:35 PM	#36
Ecchi22 Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 10,012	What others said.. 1) Noticed no one told you how to enable SEF permalinks so, go to Settings -> Permalinks and choose something like "Month and name" so you can have http://www.partyflings.com/14/07/pool-party/ instead http://www.partyflings.com/?p=3 2) No empty or "broken" links. Your About page sux http://www.partyflings.com/?page_id=2 its wordpress generated one. Remove it or write what is your blog about.. 3) Get some new theme. Default one is overused and seen practically by everyone. Even the surfer knows what script are you running first 2 seconds. And it doesn't look good. There are lots of free themes out there and you can upload few and see what fits the best. Of course, the best thing you can do is buy some premium theme ( or see sig, hit me up and I can make you some custom ;) ) 4) Use more tags, use categories & add more stuff at sidebar. Iframes, live banners, whatever. 5) Install some fancy plugins that will help you out. There are lots of threads out there, do some research and put what you need. Try to choose attractive stuff when you post. Maybe I'm not right but this picture isn't attractive at all: http://www.partyflings.com/videos/7-...enshots/01.jpg I don't think average surfer would like to see that LOL. Maybe the chick is hot but that picture is fugly. When you do everything mentioned above, start submitting your blog and trading links. Everything else is nice updates with lots of text, SEO work etc. __________________

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07-14-2008, 12:50 AM	#38
Black_Widow So Fucking Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 381	I like your theme design. Don’t listen to anyone else. Best one ever. Unique and has its touch.