Which do you think look better? (PICS) - GoFuckYourself.com

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 02:01 AM

OR

CashGordon · 11-21-2008, 02:04 AM

the top one

AnalProbe · 11-21-2008, 02:06 AM

Yep, the first one.

Last one is not bad either...

You should change the URL on the bottom, not spilt, and in capitals :

WEBMASTERLABOR.COM

with a smaller fontsize to make it fit... keep the color change for .COM (like in #3)

Don't worry, they can read it !

PersianKitty · 11-21-2008, 02:07 AM

First one

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 02:17 AM

Thanks, bro. I appreciate the detailed feedback. I'm having variations done per your feedback.

Quote:

Originally Posted by AnalProbe

Yep, the first one.

Last one is not bad either...

You should change the URL on the bottom, not spilt, and in capitals :

WEBMASTERLABOR.COM

with a smaller fontsize to make it fit... keep the color change for .COM (like in #3)

Don't worry, they can read it !

aico · 11-21-2008, 02:39 AM

#1, and like said, make the url all one line, all caps

HomerSimpson · 11-21-2008, 02:50 AM

1st one looks best

Double trouble · 11-21-2008, 03:38 AM

First one is good

Corleone · 11-21-2008, 04:05 AM

first one

viencarl · 11-21-2008, 04:12 AM

first one too

Iron Fist · 11-21-2008, 04:14 AM

Top one caught my eye first and was easiest to read.

Bojangles · 11-21-2008, 04:17 AM

First one.

BigSicK · 11-21-2008, 05:07 AM

uno is the best

Dirty Lord · 11-21-2008, 05:19 AM

I like the second one!

Sid70 · 11-21-2008, 05:23 AM

#1 fo sho

HorseShit · 11-21-2008, 06:09 AM

one does but they all look pretty cheap and 1999ish

tranza · 11-21-2008, 06:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jdavis

one does but they all look pretty cheap and 1999ish

I second that.

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 06:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jdavis

one does but they all look pretty cheap and 1999ish

Thanks for the blunt assessment, I really appreciate it. Truly. Just so I can have it revised--what would make it less "cheap" looking? Better fonts? Better aliasing?

J. Falcon · 11-21-2008, 06:40 AM

The first one looks good.

whatusay · 11-21-2008, 06:42 AM

The first one is the best, take url from 3rd, in same line

emac · 11-21-2008, 06:42 AM

first one is cool man!

pawsregd · 11-21-2008, 06:45 AM

The first one

Max - RiotDesign · 11-21-2008, 06:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by $5 submissions

Thanks for the blunt assessment, I really appreciate it. Truly. Just so I can have it revised--what would make it less "cheap" looking? Better fonts? Better aliasing?

Probably you need to add some eye candy (some background graphics, be more creative with the type, etc.) to give it some style... and the oval shape with the text on it doesnt look very modern at all

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 07:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Max - RiotDesign

Probably you need to add some eye candy (some background graphics, be more creative with the type, etc.) to give it some style... and the oval shape with the text on it doesnt look very modern at all

Thanks, I'll add that to the revision notes. Please keep the feedback coming, guys.

raven1083 · 11-21-2008, 07:19 AM

i go for the 1st one

Spunky · 11-21-2008, 07:21 AM

The first one looks good

Fucksakes · 11-21-2008, 07:28 AM

They are all pretty simple looking, making it hard to choose from the 3, even the oral runs off one side and not the other. font looks plain..

looks like a graphic guy in training, learning to make orals and gradiants colors.

Just trying to say as much bad as I can, hoping to help ya.. I remember I used to do the same way back when building sites.. I used to ask ppl that hated me.. so they would trash me.. and it only helped me.

Serial Pervert · 11-21-2008, 07:30 AM

Number 1

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 07:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fucksakes

Just trying to say as much bad as I can, hoping to help ya.. I remember I used to do the same way back when building sites.. I used to ask ppl that hated me.. so they would trash me.. and it only helped me.

Exactly. I know where you're coming from and what you mean. The best teachers are critics and skeptics. When I first started out offering outsourced text and labor services here I caught a lot of flames

Many of my critics later became friends and even clients. It's all part of the process and it can only lead to better results, if perceived for what it truly is--an opportunity to learn the market's sentiment and needs and an opportunity to prove myself.

Back to the design:

I'll add your comments to the revision notes. Thanks!

Keep the feedback going, guys.

Scott McD · 11-21-2008, 07:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AnalProbe

Yep, the first one.

Last one is not bad either...

You should change the URL on the bottom, not spilt, and in capitals :

WEBMASTERLABOR.COM

with a smaller fontsize to make it fit... keep the color change for .COM (like in #3)

Don't worry, they can read it !

Just like he said...

brassmonkey · 11-21-2008, 07:38 AM

#1 but i like #2 as well

Fucksakes · 11-21-2008, 07:56 AM

lmfao, ok so I tried to make a point.. my first time ever attempting to make something in photoshop besides cropping images.. I'll give this person more credit but you get my point.

im going to get a coffee.. I should attempt other things first thing in the morning.

bobby666 · 11-21-2008, 08:02 AM

i prefer the first

BV · 11-21-2008, 08:08 AM

lose the $ sign, use cents and rotate the .com 90 deg. to the right and free transform it to fit

CaptainHowdy · 11-21-2008, 08:22 AM

The third one does it for me...

alexchechs · 11-21-2008, 09:38 AM

top one looks best out of those

bbm · 11-21-2008, 10:56 AM

Firts

Chosen · 11-21-2008, 11:03 AM

First one

amandaspost · 11-21-2008, 11:06 AM

My vote goes for the first one

Supz · 11-21-2008, 11:18 AM

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Originally Posted by SexTronix

the top one

i agree top one

Chicks Delivery · 11-21-2008, 12:36 PM

The first one!

A-n-D-r-E-S · 11-21-2008, 12:42 PM

I'd go with #1.

Isradude · 11-21-2008, 12:43 PM

first one ...

HorseShit · 11-21-2008, 12:52 PM

none of them

Marky333 · 11-21-2008, 12:56 PM

The first one for sure! it's the kind that steal your view

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 02:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BV

lose the $ sign, use cents and rotate the .com 90 deg. to the right and free transform it to fit

Thanks, BV. I'll add that to the revision notes. Much appreciated.

PR|Jordan · 11-21-2008, 04:02 PM

top one

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RyanL · 11-21-2008, 04:10 PM

The first one which I see you're using below your name now and with the url all on one line.

My only suggestion would be to loose the drop shadow on the url. It's making it a bit hard to read.

$5 submissions · 11-21-2008, 04:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RyanL

The first one which I see you're using below your name now and with the url all on one line.

My only suggestion would be to loose the drop shadow on the url. It's making it a bit hard to read.

Thank you, Ryan. I'll add that to the revision list.

My current avatar hasn't yet incorporated most of the later revision suggestions on this thread. I should have those up for vote later on.

Thanks, guys and keep sending feedback.

NY Jester · 11-21-2008, 07:13 PM

on the grey background, definitely the top one. But all three could work, depending on the BG color/ And good call on reducing the font to fit one row for the URL

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