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Meeper · 10-30-2009, 09:29 AM

Just created a new track with a buddy of mine. Turned out pretty good IMO, would love to hear your thoughts / critique.

We created this track with nothing but a program called FL Studios.

Happy Halloween!

munki · 10-30-2009, 09:40 AM

Diggin it g

Anthony · 10-30-2009, 09:47 AM

Beginnning should have built up the layers slower instead of everything all at once.

Break beat at 1:24 should have been more pronounced, half a second at least and then blasted with your main layer/track

Nice addition of new layers around 3:05

I like the break beat around 3:40, I bet Vocals would work really well there.

Great sync with the break beats at 4:40

All in all, I like it! Great job!

Meeper · 10-30-2009, 09:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by munki

Diggin it g

Thanks dude!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anthony

Beginnning should have built up the layers slower instead of everything all at once.

Break beat at 1:24 should have been more pronounced, half a second at least and then blasted with your main layer/track

Nice addition of new layers around 3:05

I like the break beat around 3:40, I bet Vocals would work really well there.

Great sync with the break beats at 4:40

All in all, I like it! Great job!

Thanks for the in depth review Anthony

TMM_Vlad · 10-30-2009, 10:01 AM

Sounds really good man, I like to change it up to trance once in a while. Let me know if you come out with more tracks.

C4W · 10-30-2009, 10:05 AM

Nice tune

Meeper · 10-30-2009, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TMM_Vlad

Sounds really good man, I like to change it up to trance once in a while. Let me know if you come out with more tracks.

You got it dude!

Yo Adrian · 10-30-2009, 10:35 AM

Great track man, I really liked it!
Funny thing is I found myself following along with Anthony's tips to see what he meant lol

Meeper · 10-30-2009, 12:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yo Adrian

Great track man, I really liked it!
Funny thing is I found myself following along with Anthony's tips to see what he meant lol

thanks bro!

nikki99 · 10-30-2009, 01:03 PM

LoveSandra · 10-30-2009, 01:20 PM

Nice tune...........

gandalfuy · 10-30-2009, 02:10 PM

Im not a big fan of trance, Im more into tchno and tech house, but thats sounds pretty good!

Twig · 10-30-2009, 02:45 PM

I liked it

Meeper · 10-30-2009, 04:17 PM

Thanks everyone. Its always a great feeling when people enjoy your tracks

GAMEFINEST · 10-30-2009, 04:54 PM

pretty bad ass

J. Falcon · 10-30-2009, 06:30 PM

sounds good

woj · 10-30-2009, 07:16 PM

that's good stuff dude

Scott McD · 10-31-2009, 05:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Meeper

Just created a new track with a buddy of mine. Turned out pretty good IMO, would love to hear your thoughts / critique.

I like it. Sure it could be cleaned up in a few places, but overall it's pretty good.

It does fade away too much at the 1:15 mark, but that's easily fixed.

It reminds of a hube club hit from a few years ago, which i am currently going insane about trying to remember the name. Once i get it, i will post the video on here, and let you hear how that goes. It's a similar beat, and it will show you how and when you should add and tweak sounds to the tune.

Meeper · 10-31-2009, 09:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Scott McD

I like it. Sure it could be cleaned up in a few places, but overall it's pretty good.

It does fade away too much at the 1:15 mark, but that's easily fixed.

It reminds of a hube club hit from a few years ago, which i am currently going insane about trying to remember the name. Once i get it, i will post the video on here, and let you hear how that goes. It's a similar beat, and it will show you how and when you should add and tweak sounds to the tune.

Awesome dude, definitely let me know when you figure out which tune it is, im very curious to hear it.

deserv · 10-31-2009, 09:48 AM

i like it alot, simple but very likeable! great job mate

10-30-2009, 09:29 AM	#1
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10-30-2009, 09:47 AM	#3
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