PoshWife.com - revamp
 

www.poshwife.com

hi

i just had the site re-done.

what do people think?

are there any errors?

Site design looks pretty good.

As for the errors:


but non that seemed to be what I love to see, post ladies

- none

- I think you meant "posh"


I hope this is what your after too

- you're

the type that would normally look down there noses at you.

- their

I'm sure there are a lot more errors in the other texts, but that is simply what I saw at the top of the index page.

Damn, I just took a careful look at the texts descriptions for each scene and there are definitely A LOT of errors, and pretty ugly ones at that. You will need to hire a professional to fix them, if you care about upgrading the quality of your texts.

Not me, though. I'm already under contract. :)


However I could probably refer you to a very good freelance writer.

hi

thanks chaps for your help.

changed.

i think you meant "polish"

www.polishwife.com

It was only I who helped :thumbsup

nice designs....

"These posh wife's..." makes you look dumb.

did a third grader write your text?
here's another one:

No offense, but you say at the top the Posh Wife's like the finer things in life. But in the first set of photos, the large image, there is a nightstand I guess that looks like it is from office depot.

If you are saying that these women like expensive ( Finer ) things, then you need to have them in the photos.

Yeah there are some seriously ugly spelling errors in there. My advice is that you hire a professional to write your texts for you.

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