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DVTimes · 06-21-2007, 06:22 PM

www.poshwife.com

hi

i just had the site re-done.

what do people think?

are there any errors?

J. Falcon · 06-21-2007, 07:41 PM

Site design looks pretty good.

As for the errors:

but non that seemed to be what I love to see, post ladies

- none

- I think you meant "posh"

I hope this is what your after too

- you're

the type that would normally look down there noses at you.

- their

J. Falcon · 06-21-2007, 07:42 PM

I'm sure there are a lot more errors in the other texts, but that is simply what I saw at the top of the index page.

J. Falcon · 06-21-2007, 07:46 PM

Damn, I just took a careful look at the texts descriptions for each scene and there are definitely A LOT of errors, and pretty ugly ones at that. You will need to hire a professional to fix them, if you care about upgrading the quality of your texts.

Not me, though. I'm already under contract.

However I could probably refer you to a very good freelance writer.

DVTimes · 06-22-2007, 04:37 AM

hi

thanks chaps for your help.

changed.

You Forgot Poland · 06-22-2007, 04:41 AM

i think you meant "polish"

www.polishwife.com

J. Falcon · 06-22-2007, 06:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by allanuk

hi

thanks chaps for your help.

changed.

It was only I who helped

Ace_luffy · 06-22-2007, 08:16 AM

nice designs....

Ebola · 06-22-2007, 08:42 AM

"These posh wife's..." makes you look dumb.

JakeR · 06-22-2007, 08:50 AM

did a third grader write your text?
here's another one:

Quote:

I met her is a shopping centre

pornguy · 06-22-2007, 08:56 AM

No offense, but you say at the top the Posh Wife's like the finer things in life. But in the first set of photos, the large image, there is a nightstand I guess that looks like it is from office depot.

If you are saying that these women like expensive ( Finer ) things, then you need to have them in the photos.

J. Falcon · 06-22-2007, 09:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JakeR

did a third grader write your text?
here's another one:

Yeah there are some seriously ugly spelling errors in there. My advice is that you hire a professional to write your texts for you.

J. Falcon · 06-24-2007, 01:39 AM

Bump for Posh Babes

06-21-2007, 06:22 PM	#1
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