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Fukcdoll · 04-02-2009, 09:29 AM

Hey everyone, I've built my first 'REAL' web page, featuring my AllXDoll buisness (linked market to AllXCLUB)

And i was wondering if I could some honest opinions on my page?

I've been practicing building @ www.fukcdollsfavorites.com if you wanna see a bit more of me and who I am?
Free pix and vids there too!

But the page I'd like you to rate the most is @ www.AllXDoll.com

favorites is just more for learning and fun- lol

Any input on AllXDoll would be greatly apriciated

Thnx

Roby · 04-02-2009, 11:05 AM

looking nice..

Fukcdoll · 04-02-2009, 05:45 PM

thnx

It's a work in progress

*wink*

Would you cahnge anything B4 promo?

I want it took look good!!!!

s281 · 04-02-2009, 08:48 PM

Love the use of Welcum in place of Welcome but I did notice that Performing is mispelled Preformance at the bottom. Other than that, looks great!

martinsc · 04-02-2009, 10:19 PM

doesn't work here... in ff3

Jack Sparrow · 04-03-2009, 12:17 AM

Add some more colour perhaps?
I first thought it was a parked page, because of the style of layout and colour ;)

Elixir · 04-03-2009, 02:00 AM

Star with blogs..make some money and then you can work...

If you need any help, feel free to hit up me on ICQ

And check my si ofcours

Fukcdoll · 04-03-2009, 08:34 PM

DOH!

I'm a horrible speller
thnx for the input- I'll make some corrections and adjustments soon- so feel free to checkit out in a day or so and re comment

I apreciate all the help I can get

CyberHustler · 04-03-2009, 08:39 PM

Not too shabby for a first timer... but you should really consider hiring a designer.

CyberHustler · 04-03-2009, 08:42 PM

And them sounds on allxclub, allxclub pro, etc... all them sounds suck dick cheese.

Darkhorse · 04-04-2009, 01:34 AM

Very bland, I would look more at the colors and so forth but ya not bad for first time.

Xxaru Media · 04-04-2009, 08:07 AM

A bit hard to navigate. A lot of room for improvement on the design... but not bad for a 1st time.

mike.xxxtreams · 04-28-2009, 09:19 AM

Nice start, I like the 'cumming soon' statement

Denny · 04-28-2009, 11:06 AM

not bad

brassmonkey · 05-01-2009, 07:25 AM

looks good

04-02-2009, 09:29 AM	#1
Fukcdoll Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Toronto Area Posts: 211	Building my 1st webpage- how did I do? Hey everyone, I've built my first 'REAL' web page, featuring my AllXDoll buisness (linked market to AllXCLUB) And i was wondering if I could some honest opinions on my page? I've been practicing building @ www.fukcdollsfavorites.com if you wanna see a bit more of me and who I am? Free pix and vids there too! But the page I'd like you to rate the most is @ www.AllXDoll.com favorites is just more for learning and fun- lol Any input on AllXDoll would be greatly apriciated Thnx

04-02-2009, 11:05 AM	#2
Roby Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Praga Posts: 8,035	looking nice.. __________________ PicsForDesign - images for your Promo Work for Designers and Artists

04-02-2009, 08:48 PM	#4
s281 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Scottsdale, AZ Posts: 16	Love the use of Welcum in place of Welcome but I did notice that Performing is mispelled Preformance at the bottom. Other than that, looks great! __________________ AdultXXXvault.com ICQ: 473875882

04-02-2009, 10:19 PM	#5
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04-03-2009, 02:00 AM	#7
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04-02-2009, 05:45 PM	#3
Fukcdoll Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Toronto Area Posts: 211	thnx It's a work in progress wink Would you cahnge anything B4 promo? I want it took look good!!!!

04-03-2009, 12:17 AM	#6
Jack Sparrow Almost goners.. Industry Role: Join Date: May 2008 Location: Netherlands Posts: 11,420	Add some more colour perhaps? I first thought it was a parked page, because of the style of layout and colour ;)

04-03-2009, 08:34 PM	#8
Fukcdoll Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Toronto Area Posts: 211	DOH! I'm a horrible speller thnx for the input- I'll make some corrections and adjustments soon- so feel free to checkit out in a day or so and re comment I apreciate all the help I can get

04-03-2009, 08:39 PM	#9
CyberHustler Masterbaiter Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 26,557	Not too shabby for a first timer... but you should really consider hiring a designer.

04-03-2009, 08:42 PM	#10
CyberHustler Masterbaiter Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 26,557	And them sounds on allxclub, allxclub pro, etc... all them sounds suck dick cheese.

04-04-2009, 01:34 AM	#11
Darkhorse Horsing Around Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: AU Posts: 5,864	Very bland, I would look more at the colors and so forth but ya not bad for first time.

04-04-2009, 08:07 AM	#12
Xxaru Media Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: MIA Posts: 255	A bit hard to navigate. A lot of room for improvement on the design... but not bad for a 1st time.

04-28-2009, 09:19 AM	#13
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04-28-2009, 11:06 AM	#14
Denny Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 17,301	not bad __________________

05-01-2009, 07:25 AM	#15
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