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shimmy2 · 12-08-2009, 09:39 PM

Suggestions are open, tell me what you think of my tour page here folks:

http://www.ndngirls.com/index1.html

mazo · 12-08-2009, 11:48 PM

lookin good! I only see one issue and that's where you have text. Why are we able to edit it?????? THat's not good!

shimmy2 · 12-09-2009, 12:13 AM

where is this at?

purecharlie · 12-09-2009, 02:51 AM

He's talking about the descriptions of each individual scene. For example "Celene Morningbutterfly" - the descriptive text to the right of this is editable. It's because you have used a text input box rather than something like an iFrame which would work (and look) better.
Other than that the site looks good but I do have one question - Is NDN a well-known abbreviation for Native American Girl in the USA? I have never heard of it before and think that probably a lot of people in the rest of the world won't have heard of it either.
If it IS a well-known saying in the US, maybe you should spell it out for us thickos from elsewhere - maybe putting somewhere in the header what the N, D and N stands for?

shimmy2 · 12-09-2009, 11:27 AM

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Originally Posted by purecharlie

one question - Is NDN a well-known abbreviation for Native American Girl in the USA? I have never heard of it before and think that probably a lot of people in the rest of the world won't have heard of it either.
If it IS a well-known saying in the US, maybe you should spell it out for us thickos from elsewhere - maybe putting somewhere in the header what the N, D and N stands for?

Amongst themselves thats what they call each other, NDNgirls... the really politically correct uppity ones (about 5% of them) want to be called "first nations" or "ahnisnabe" just like some educated niggas want to be called african americans and such... there is really no way to please everyone so i kept it simple and i'll take the heat. A lot of my filipino friends in Cali, and even JenniDahling call themselves AZNs (asians). I do have the domains hotnativeamericangirls.com and nativeamericanxxx.com but i think it sounds too politically correct and proper for a porn site, and all those letters would look horrible on a tshirt or anything in print. Hopefully i can brand the term a bit more and people start using and reffering to them as what they call each other anyway. Thnx for the input on the iframe textbox tip

mazo · 12-09-2009, 12:03 PM

hmm that's all rather interesting! Thanks for the info

12-08-2009, 09:39 PM	#1
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12-09-2009, 12:13 AM	#3
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12-09-2009, 02:51 AM	#4
purecharlie Confirmed User Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 622	He's talking about the descriptions of each individual scene. For example "Celene Morningbutterfly" - the descriptive text to the right of this is editable. It's because you have used a text input box rather than something like an iFrame which would work (and look) better. Other than that the site looks good but I do have one question - Is NDN a well-known abbreviation for Native American Girl in the USA? I have never heard of it before and think that probably a lot of people in the rest of the world won't have heard of it either. If it IS a well-known saying in the US, maybe you should spell it out for us thickos from elsewhere - maybe putting somewhere in the header what the N, D and N stands for? __________________ www.purecfnm.com \| www.ladyvoyeurs.com \| www.amateurcfnm.com www.girlsabuseguys.com \| www.heylittledick.com Amazing ratios from the biggest CFNM Network in the world! Follow us on Twitter @purecfnm

12-09-2009, 12:03 PM	#6
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12-08-2009, 11:48 PM	#2
mazo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 28	lookin good! I only see one issue and that's where you have text. Why are we able to edit it?????? THat's not good!