Feedback on my writing service site - GoFuckYourself.com

TrainWreckContent · 03-17-2011, 11:36 PM

Back in December I started doing a few writing jobs for a few people. I then started pass some of the work off to a few of the models I work with regularly. Since then things have started picking up so I got a domain www.expresswritersonline.com and made a basic site using wix. Its nothing real fancy but I think I works for what we are doing? I would love any feedback you guys might be able to give me on the site.
I have also made a thread in the now hiring as we are currently taking on new clients.

babymaker · 03-18-2011, 12:00 AM

Nice site

Astro$ · 03-18-2011, 12:29 AM

Site with good and clear design.

taken300 · 03-18-2011, 12:37 AM

Interesting... Good luck man!!

JuiceMonkey · 03-18-2011, 12:38 AM

Why don't you add some examples.. prices.. complete service list. Looks like you're missing a ton of stuff. I'd also recommend not using flash for your entire website, or a website creator.

TrainWreckContent · 03-18-2011, 09:39 AM

thanks for the feedback guys i will take what you had to say into consideration Juicemonkey as these are some good point

FreeHugeMovies · 03-18-2011, 11:27 AM

I think the website is terrible. No color and all in flash? No logo?

CDSmith · 03-18-2011, 12:34 PM

From your contact page: "ICQ: 55555"

55555? Really? :D

One thing -- and this is obviously just in my opinion, but... I think if you're going to promote and purport yourself as a writer for hire, it would behoove you to clean up your board posts a bit. I'm seeing a lot of typos, sentences started without caps, lack of punctuation, etc, and that's just in the few posts you've made in this thread. If I was looking to hire someone to write for me I would be looking at this and wondering if your work is any better than your posts.

Random posts in other threads, yes I can see posting however you want, but when it is a thread about your writing business, welllll... I think you might want to start previewing and proofreading your posts.

TrainWreckContent · 03-19-2011, 07:09 PM

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Originally Posted by FreeHugeMovies

I think the website is terrible. No color and all in flash? No logo?

Its just a basic site ...can you tell me why flash if bad?

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Originally Posted by CDSmith

From your contact page: "ICQ: 55555"

55555? Really? :D

One thing -- and this is obviously just in my opinion, but... I think if you're going to promote and purport yourself as a writer for hire, it would behoove you to clean up your board posts a bit. I'm seeing a lot of typos, sentences started without caps, lack of punctuation, etc, and that's just in the few posts you've made in this thread. If I was looking to hire someone to write for me I would be looking at this and wondering if your work is any better than your posts.

Random posts in other threads, yes I can see posting however you want, but when it is a thread about your writing business, welllll... I think you might want to start previewing and proofreading your posts.

thanks for pointing out the ICQ number I thought we changed that.

In regards to your other comments...I am not actually one of the writers as I use other writers to do the actual work for our customers. Not saying that I can't write properly as I of course still have to proof my writers work to ensure quality control. When I made the post I was just in board posting mode but you made a very good point....thank you for the feedback anyone else??

BTW ? don?t forget to read the feedback people have already given our services https://gfy.com/showthread.php?p=17870053

babymaker · 03-19-2011, 07:40 PM

DateDoc · 03-19-2011, 08:10 PM

Open it up to crowd sourcing and let others do the work while you take a cut.

icymelon · 03-19-2011, 08:38 PM

hit me up. I think american girls are probably out of my budget but lets chat about it

woj · 03-19-2011, 08:47 PM

not bad, but it's kinda lame that wix.com branding is all over it. do they offer premium option or something so you can remove it?

LRS · 03-19-2011, 11:49 PM

>>Specializing in content discriptions

discriptions??

alias · 03-19-2011, 11:56 PM

Hey bro, I'd suggest using wordpress. My brother made a site for his art using wix and while their system is functional it is a bit lacking for people to find in search since it is all in flash.

Some hosts offer good deals on virtual servers that can host wordpress with 1 click installs and upgrades. Amerinoc had a special on St. Patricks for like 17 for the first year.

Honestly, if you just need the domain hosted email me [email protected] I'll set you up with wordpress on it too.

v4 media · 03-20-2011, 04:21 AM

Not to be a dick, but the first paragraph doesn't really flow and has 2 mistakes.

Not the sort of thing people look for in a writer.

TrainWreckContent · 03-21-2011, 01:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icymelon

hit me up. I think american girls are probably out of my budget but lets chat about it

I'll hit you up I am sure we can work something out

Quote:

Originally Posted by woj

not bad, but it's kinda lame that wix.com branding is all over it. do they offer premium option or something so you can remove it?

Actually I just looked into that and for like 5 bux you can get rid of that which isnt bad but I think I am going to redo the site in word press.

Quote:

Originally Posted by alias

Hey bro, I'd suggest using wordpress. My brother made a site for his art using wix and while their system is functional it is a bit lacking for people to find in search since it is all in flash.

Some hosts offer good deals on virtual servers that can host wordpress with 1 click installs and upgrades. Amerinoc had a special on St. Patricks for like 17 for the first year.

Honestly, if you just need the domain hosted email me [email protected] I'll set you up with wordpress on it too.

thanks i think that is what we are going to do is set up the site using word press. Really appricate you offering to help!!

Quote:

Originally Posted by v4 media

Not to be a dick, but the first paragraph doesn't really flow and has 2 mistakes.

Not the sort of thing people look for in a writer.

no I prefer you be honest as I want to know what people think. As i mentioned above we are going to make some changes to the site based on the feedback we received.

thanks guys!!

moviebiz · 03-21-2011, 03:40 AM

Nice site. Good luck with it.

babymaker · 03-21-2011, 03:44 AM

Fixing up asap

Fiddler · 03-21-2011, 05:10 AM

Just taken up an order with Riggo, he's always been reliable with other services I've had from him so look forward to these results!

TrainWreckContent · 03-24-2011, 09:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moviebiz

Nice site. Good luck with it.

thanks

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fiddler

Just taken up an order with Riggo, he's always been reliable with other services I've had from him so look forward to these results!

thanks for the work so far things are off to a good start!!

Peace · 03-25-2011, 05:02 AM

looks good. Thanks for the info

DamianJ · 03-25-2011, 05:14 AM

Wow.

I love the header.

The copy is minimal but works for me. Simple, clean and clear.

Good job.

03-17-2011, 11:36 PM	#1
TrainWreckContent Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Under a Train Wreck Posts: 8,127	Feedback on my writing service site Back in December I started doing a few writing jobs for a few people. I then started pass some of the work off to a few of the models I work with regularly. Since then things have started picking up so I got a domain www.expresswritersonline.com and made a basic site using wix. Its nothing real fancy but I think I works for what we are doing? I would love any feedback you guys might be able to give me on the site. I have also made a thread in the now hiring as we are currently taking on new clients. __________________ Train Wreck Content Telegram @DanTrainwreck / Whatsapp TrainWreck / Email [email protected]

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03-18-2011, 09:39 AM	#6
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03-18-2011, 12:29 AM	#3
Astro$ Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: www.astrodollars.com Posts: 59	Site with good and clear design.

03-18-2011, 11:27 AM	#7
FreeHugeMovies Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Charlotte, NC Posts: 14,137	I think the website is terrible. No color and all in flash? No logo?

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