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Urbi · 10-09-2011, 05:00 AM

Hi guys!
I`m finally putting online my site www.nastycamera.com with aff. program. Please could some try for me webmaster join (what is on bottom of index page) and tell me if everything work ok?

Another thing...my english is not that good

so text for each movie is probably not that good...also could some nice persone here help me about that?

Thank you!

Denny · 10-09-2011, 05:04 AM

Lack of content.

DamianJ · 10-09-2011, 05:06 AM

Shocking footage from school clas. Three girls prepared something for class nerd. They punished her, write on her face, that she`s a bitch and tear her pantyhose. What`s more..they forced her to lick their pussies, but as you will see, she like it a lot so in fact it was not a punishment. BTW in next part, teacher will find out..

->

Incredible 4 girl action footage filmed in a college classroom. Three girls pick on the class nerd. They humiliate her, write bitch on her face, rip her pantyhose and force her to lick their young delicate pussies. However, as you will find out, that didn't really punish her much, as it turns out she lapped it up. Stay tuned for part two, where their teacher walks in and catches them...

You need this fixed professionally. Fortunately, it's one of the things I do. So email damian AT adultmarketing DOT co DOT uk

Urbi · 10-09-2011, 05:14 AM

Denny : I know...I have lot more, what I`ll add in following days/weeks.

DamianJ : thanks man! Will contact you in email.

shimmy2 · 10-09-2011, 05:50 AM

i think the english diction adds a nice touch dont take it so seriously, go torbe style

2intense · 10-09-2011, 08:12 AM

not bad at all. good luck

Urbi · 10-09-2011, 12:26 PM

thanks! most is my own production lol

anexsia · 10-09-2011, 12:57 PM

Yeah, you need someone good with English to rewrite some of your text.

georgeyw · 10-09-2011, 01:47 PM

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Originally Posted by anexsia

Yeah, you need someone good with English to rewrite some of your text.

Agreed.

There are a few pro writers on here aren't there?

harvey · 10-09-2011, 04:46 PM

A failure waiting to happen. Don't take it wrong, but it has so many issues you'll find yourself wasting money and wondering why you can't make a sale. Just as an appetizer: You're using a tube style, you have 12 scenes and you want to charge $30 to see those scenes, when any tube site has thousands with better quality and for free. You have no navigation, the "czech" angle isn't original (anybody knows that a lot of the content they see today comes from there), the layout is bland, nothing stands out... well, it's like you're leaving no room for the slight opportunity to succeed. I'd recommend you to get more content, get rid of "Czech" and change it to EURO and get a proper layout, even a super horrible amateur one, but something with a little bit of personality that won't be forgotten the minute you leave the site. Just my

, of course

garce · 10-09-2011, 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Urbi

Hi guys!
I`m finally putting online my site www.nastycamera.com with aff. program. Please could some try for me webmaster join (what is on bottom of index page) and tell me if everything work ok?

Another thing...my english is not that good

so text for each movie is probably not that good...also could some nice persone here help me about that?

Thank you!

I watched the first video for a second and closed it because the guys in it are unbelieveably annoying. I wanted to punch them in their stupid slave Russian faces.

DigitalTheory · 10-09-2011, 04:50 PM

uh whats the split for webmasters?? might wanna put that general info on there before we sign up.

topsiteking · 10-09-2011, 06:50 PM

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Originally Posted by DigitalTheory

uh whats the split for webmasters?? might wanna put that general info on there before we sign up.

DBS.US · 10-09-2011, 06:57 PM

It's NastyCamera.com not www.nastycamera.com

Jon Oso · 10-09-2011, 09:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by garce

I watched the first video for a second and closed it because the guys in it are unbelieveably annoying. I wanted to punch them in their stupid slave Russian faces.

Wanted to see what you were talking about... that blond kid is fucking obnoxious.

porno jew · 10-09-2011, 09:27 PM

the videos have some personality. good job mate. don't change a think.

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 12:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by garce

I watched the first video for a second and closed it because the guys in it are unbelieveably annoying. I wanted to punch them in their stupid slave Russian faces.

Thanks...but they are not Russian...if you can`t recognize russian and czech, I`m sorry for you..but many americans still don`t know where the Czech republic is located so you are just one of them

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 12:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DigitalTheory

uh whats the split for webmasters?? might wanna put that general info on there before we sign up.

My bad...will add.. 50/50

porno jew · 10-10-2011, 12:28 AM

get someone to clean up the engrish i like the rest.

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 12:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harvey

A failure waiting to happen. Don't take it wrong, but it has so many issues you'll find yourself wasting money and wondering why you can't make a sale. Just as an appetizer: You're using a tube style, you have 12 scenes and you want to charge $30 to see those scenes, when any tube site has thousands with better quality and for free. You have no navigation, the "czech" angle isn't original (anybody knows that a lot of the content they see today comes from there), the layout is bland, nothing stands out... well, it's like you're leaving no room for the slight opportunity to succeed. I'd recommend you to get more content, get rid of "Czech" and change it to EURO and get a proper layout, even a super horrible amateur one, but something with a little bit of personality that won't be forgotten the minute you leave the site. Just my

, of course

Thank you Harvey, I`ll take some of your comments in my mind.

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 12:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by porno jew

get someone to clean up the engrish i like the rest.

Thanks, I hope, I will find somebody here for nice english descriptions

)

porno jew · 10-10-2011, 12:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Urbi

Thanks, I hope, I will find somebody here for nice english descriptions

)

hit up the magician in this thread. or a guy named fatfoo.

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 12:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by garce

I watched the first video for a second and closed it because the guys in it are unbelieveably annoying. I wanted to punch them in their stupid slave Russian faces.

And one more thing Garce... I don`t like racism so if you do, please don`t write into my threads, thank you.

MrDeiz · 10-10-2011, 01:25 AM

looks great
going to list you at Signbucks.com soon

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 01:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by daizzzy

looks great
going to list you at Signbucks.com soon

thanks Daizzzy

OneWhoKnows · 10-10-2011, 02:19 AM

Hmm, not sure about your site concept. Sure, your niche seems to be "Czech", however you mix Mature, Teen and Babe/Pornstar type of content. This could work, but only if you have a HUGE amount of content. Otherwise I'd say it's hard to sell on niched traffic

Urbi · 10-10-2011, 10:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OneWhoKnows

Hmm, not sure about your site concept. Sure, your niche seems to be "Czech", however you mix Mature, Teen and Babe/Pornstar type of content. This could work, but only if you have a HUGE amount of content. Otherwise I'd say it's hard to sell on niched traffic

You have point...but that`s what I shoot, so I have to try sell it

I dont have thousands of mature and teen vids so I have to sell what I have. Lets see if it will work or not.

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DamianJ Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: A magical land Posts: 15,808	Shocking footage from school clas. Three girls prepared something for class nerd. They punished her, write on her face, that she`s a bitch and tear her pantyhose. What`s more..they forced her to lick their pussies, but as you will see, she like it a lot so in fact it was not a punishment. BTW in next part, teacher will find out.. -> Incredible 4 girl action footage filmed in a college classroom. Three girls pick on the class nerd. They humiliate her, write bitch on her face, rip her pantyhose and force her to lick their young delicate pussies. However, as you will find out, that didn't really punish her much, as it turns out she lapped it up. Stay tuned for part two, where their teacher walks in and catches them... You need this fixed professionally. Fortunately, it's one of the things I do. So email damian AT adultmarketing DOT co DOT uk

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harvey Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 9,266	A failure waiting to happen. Don't take it wrong, but it has so many issues you'll find yourself wasting money and wondering why you can't make a sale. Just as an appetizer: You're using a tube style, you have 12 scenes and you want to charge $30 to see those scenes, when any tube site has thousands with better quality and for free. You have no navigation, the "czech" angle isn't original (anybody knows that a lot of the content they see today comes from there), the layout is bland, nothing stands out... well, it's like you're leaving no room for the slight opportunity to succeed. I'd recommend you to get more content, get rid of "Czech" and change it to EURO and get a proper layout, even a super horrible amateur one, but something with a little bit of personality that won't be forgotten the minute you leave the site. Just my , of course __________________ This post is endorsed by CIA, KGB, MI6, the Mafia, Illuminati, Kim Jong Il, Worldwide Ninjas Association, Klingon Empire and lolcats. Don't mess around with it, just accept it and embrace the truth

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porno jew Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 10,166	the videos have some personality. good job mate. don't change a think.

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OneWhoKnows Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: European Union Posts: 873	Hmm, not sure about your site concept. Sure, your niche seems to be "Czech", however you mix Mature, Teen and Babe/Pornstar type of content. This could work, but only if you have a HUGE amount of content. Otherwise I'd say it's hard to sell on niched traffic