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Old 01-23-2012, 06:51 AM   #1
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About to publish e-book, on traffic generation - a brief outline inside (review copies available)

As seasoned, marketing veteran and long time internet entraprenier I am happy to pass on some experiences and, new methods.

The e-book is titled: "The traffic, it is good."

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The e-book will cover a new method I have uncovered that most likely very few people are, utilizing. Without giving away the exact methodology I can give the main points:

We know that people, search, for websites. What if websites, searched, for people?

We, are going to, write them a letter using the internet!

Using search sites like hotbot.com you can, use special search techniques to, find the people you want to write to by searching the domain endings of popular e-mail, providers.

Copy, and paste them as you find them to a spreadsheet.

Once, you have finished writing to the people you found you can move on to the next search site to find, more people. A list of search sites will be included in the e-book.

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That is the rough outline. Publishing date has yet to be announced. Review copies available to a select few, upon request.
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Do you cover maximising sources such as of which geocities? I get mad cash from them, yo.
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reads like a bad translation...
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You might double your revenue from the book with some good editing. You may or may not know much about traffic but your English could really use some work. All of those commas, for example. Your post has fifteen commas when it should have none. All fifteen are wrong. Commas are used to set off non-essential parts of a sentence. In other words, by using a comma you are saying the sentence works still be complete without that part.


Wait - Hotbot? Your example of a search engine is Hotbot? So this was written in 1997?
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I, love, commas, lets, use, them, loads, makes, for, great, reading ,,,,,
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Do you cover maximising sources such as of which geocities? I get mad cash from them, yo.
To my knowledge, geocities in now part of yahoo and changed, so I did not cover it.
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reads like a bad translation...
I am a going to make a final read and edit still, thanks for the input.
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You might double your revenue from the book with some good editing. You may or may not know much about traffic but your English could really use some work. All of those commas, for example. Your post has fifteen commas when it should have none. All fifteen are wrong. Commas are used to set off non-essential parts of a sentence. In other words, by using a comma you are saying the sentence works still be complete without that part.


Wait - Hotbot? Your example of a search engine is Hotbot? So this was written in 1997?
I will still make some edits, however some of my comma use is correct I am sure of it.

Will think over some points you made. Thanks for the input.
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Do you cover maximising sources such as of which geocities? I get mad cash from them, yo.
Why the hell would anyone use Geocities instead of Angelfire?
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dear sir, i am very good seo expert, may u include me in ur seo book? sir i offer good search advice and can write in ur book for $0.75/hourly if u choose to accept sir. please send email at [email protected]
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Did you hire Paul to do the ghostwriting?
Why do you think this? I have no affiliation with Paul.
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dear sir, i am very good seo expert, may u include me in ur seo book? sir i offer good search advice and can write in ur book for $0.75/hourly if u choose to accept sir. please send email at [email protected]
Sorry, my book is not taking the seo aspect of traffic generation. Maybe we can work together on another ebook I publish, in the future.
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I must work over some suggestions from this thread before, I think. Once it is worked over then I will.
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In other words, by using a comma you are saying the sentence works still be complete without that part.
"by using a comma you are saying the sentence works still be complete without that part"

Yours doesn't.
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Not true, its what you put the camera on.
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TRipod is used mostly for amature sites.
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I notice you've taken the comma advice.

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From what I understand you are scraping websites for email addresses and sending those people emails? That is what I interpreted it as anyway. Correct me if I am wrong, which I think I am.
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Comma's are a matter of taste well written content not so much.
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I will be prefer to using excite, as mine feeling is hotbot is too newly, and will not knowing older persons.
How much number funny cats is optimal for email?





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From what I understand you are scraping websites for email addresses and sending those people emails? That is what I interpreted it as anyway. Correct me if I am wrong, which I think I am.
Not sure about, the scrape but it is sending invitation. How best to do this is in the e-book.
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I made about $20,000 per month on my Geocities pages. I miss them.
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I will be prefer to using excite, as mine feeling is hotbot is too newly, and will not knowing older persons.
How much number funny cats is optimal for email?





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Thank you for the interest, excite can also be used, in this method. The e-book will tell, how to optimize the emails for the people you want to send invitations.

Good point.
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Not sure about, the scrape but it is sending invitation. How best to do this is in the e-book.
is your book next big interwebs thing innit? will u offer it on big wf forum as well like or exclussive to here where the industry meats?
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Comma's are a matter of taste well written content not so much.
No, they aren't a matter of taste any more than periods are. A period goes at the end of a sentence. A comma separates lists and independent clauses. I may have missed a correct one, but I believe all fifteen of yours are simply wrong and are extremely annoying.

That last sentence is an example of independent clauses - each side of the comma is a complete sentence by itself by dropping the conjunction:
I may have missed a correct one.
I believe all fifteen of yours are simply wrong and are extremely annoying.

The independent clause can also be separated from a dependent clause:

At 10 o'clock, you overused commas.


The independent clause, which could be a sentence unto itself, comes after the comma:

You overused commas.

Another example:

A well regulated militia being necessary to the security of a free state, the right of the people to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed.

The independent clause after the comma is a complete sentence:
The right of the people to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed.

Lastly, there is the parenthetical, a dependent clause embedded in the middle of an independent clause:

The President, Barak Obama, refused to submit a budget.

Taking only the part separated by commas, we still have a complete sentence:

The President refused to submit a budget.

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Damian has given it a read, and crititc it. So for now I will write, the changes he has suggested.
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is your book next big interwebs thing innit? will u offer it on big wf forum as well like or exclussive to here where the industry meats?
I will see, where there is interest for this product. Maybe give this e-book away for free, to get my name as author known.
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No, they aren't a matter of taste any more than periods are. A period goes at the end of a sentence. A comma separates lists and independent clauses. I may have missed a correct one, but I believe all fifteen of yours are simply wrong and are extremely annoying.

That last sentence is an example of independent clauses - each side of the comma is a complete sentence by itself by dropping the conjunction:
I may have missed a correct one.
I believe all fifteen of yours are simply wrong and are extremely annoying.

The independent clause can also be separated from a dependent clause:

At 10 o'clock, you overused commas.


The independent clause, which could be a sentence unto itself, comes after the comma:

You overused commas.

Another example:

A well regulated militia being necessary to the security of a free state, the right of the people to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed.

The independent clause after the comma is a complete sentence:
The right of the people to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed.

Lastly, there is the parenthetical, a dependent clause embedded in the middle of an independent clause:

The President, Barak Obama, refused to submit a budget.

Taking only the part separated by commas, we still have a complete sentence:

The President refused to submit a budget.

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Okay, thank you for educating. I will read and see how I can include this in my writing style in future e-book's.
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How is this? Do you mean, like ghostwriters?
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I pay myself. But I understand what you mean.
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Writing is like the artform's. Sometime people will like the writing style sometimes not.

Also many people are jelious towards the skill's of others.
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Old 01-24-2012, 01:03 PM   #48
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Old 01-24-2012, 02:20 PM   #49
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Writing is like the artform's. Sometime people will like the writing style sometimes not.

Also many people are jelious towards the skill's of others.
Your content may be great.

Your presentation sucks though. You need to understand that and drop the defensive 'oh its just jealousy' because if you don't hear what people are saying and take it to heart your end product is going to suck too.

Nobody will read a book that is written Like! Captain! Kirk! Talks!
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Old 01-24-2012, 03:22 PM   #50
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Your content may be great.

Your presentation sucks though. You need to understand that and drop the defensive 'oh its just jealousy' because if you don't hear what people are saying and take it to heart your end product is going to suck too.

Nobody will read a book that is written Like! Captain! Kirk! Talks!
I see the point you are making but you must agree that different writing styles are also a factor.
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