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Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:15 PM

I would love to hear your feedbacks. I'm thinking about doing a complete album
but I also want to focus on kids. So for her touring right now is out of the question but having an an album is the one thing she is missing from her list of things to do in her lifetime. Everything else has pretty much been accomplished. I may have to fire up one of my old labels because there is already talks about this song getting radio play.
Let me know your thoughts.
Speak your mind. I'm sure not everyone is into her style of music.

If you don't like it, what would you change?

I'll make sure to pass the info to her. Also, if you like it, she has it on her myspace page, you can add it to your page from there.

Thanks for taking the time to listen to it.

Ghost - Featuring Jeremy Greene

TampaToker · 10-24-2008, 11:22 PM

Wow im really surprised very nice work you wife has a fantastic voice. This is not my style of music but my wife and daughter would eat this up!

datatank · 10-24-2008, 11:23 PM

How much did that cost you?

Sorry man

Slick · 10-24-2008, 11:24 PM

Hey Dave, I checked out the song and I like it, the chorus is great, very chatchy, I could picture that song on the radio.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:24 PM

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Originally Posted by datatank

How much did that cost you?

Sorry man

Not much, I own a studio. Why you ask.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:25 PM

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Originally Posted by TampaToker

Wow im really surprised very nice work you wife has a fantastic voice. This is not my style of music but my wife and daughter would eat this up!

Thanks man, that is awesome to hear. I think her next one I'm going to do a Dance Track and play it at the club and see the respone. Something like Brittany's Womanizer Track.

Thanks for taking the time to listen to it.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Slick

Hey Dave, I checked out the song and I like it, the chorus is great, very chatchy, I could picture that song on the radio.

Very cool. Thanks.

PostWhore · 10-24-2008, 11:27 PM

i was expecting naked pics....

baddog · 10-24-2008, 11:28 PM

Not really my style of music, but the thing that I noticed was the background orchestra music was way to loud for her. Overwhelming.

PR|Jordan · 10-24-2008, 11:28 PM

That is FANTASTIC! She has a great voice!

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:28 PM

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Originally Posted by PostWhore

i was expecting naked pics....

You must not read subject lines very well and or have no respect with the Word Wife in there. Sorry!

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:29 PM

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Originally Posted by baddog

Not really my style of music, but the thing that I noticed was the background orchestra music was way to loud for her. Overwhelming.

Yeah, sounds a little different on that page and the real master.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:30 PM

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Originally Posted by PR|Jordan

That is FANTASTIC! She has a great voice!

Thanks Jordan.

baddog · 10-24-2008, 11:31 PM

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Originally Posted by CyberAge-Dave

Yeah, sounds a little different on that page and the real master.

I was thinking to myself, "I wish there was an equalizer on this laptop."

I am sure young chicks will love it.

Bojangles · 10-24-2008, 11:32 PM

Not my type of music...

But, for this type of music the chorus is definitely catchy. I could picture this song being played on the radio as well.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:33 PM

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Originally Posted by baddog

I was thinking to myself, "I wish there was an equalizer on this laptop."

I am sure young chicks will love it.

That's funny.
Thanks for checking it out.

tony286 · 10-24-2008, 11:33 PM

what a nice voice

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Bojangles

Not my type of music...

But, for this type of music the chorus is definitely catchy. I could picture this song being played on the radio as well.

Thanks Bojangles for taking the time to listen to it.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-24-2008, 11:38 PM

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Originally Posted by tony404

what a nice voice

Thanks Tony.

DatingGold · 10-24-2008, 11:52 PM

she's really good!

kane · 10-25-2008, 01:18 AM

It is not my kind of music but I have to say when you hear the top 10 songs on billboard they all sound like this one so I think people would like it and it could find an audience.

That said, if I were producing the song I would get rid of the guy. She is good and while he is okay having him in it seems to take the song from being a good pop song to being more of show tunes kind of thing. Just my 2cents.

munki · 10-25-2008, 01:31 AM

I was diggin it... a lil heavy on the background fluff. Killer voice, layoff the effects a bit and eq a bit more and you've got a serious single on your hands there.

bobby666 · 10-25-2008, 03:14 AM

i like what i can hear

MrMaxwell · 10-25-2008, 03:21 AM

I love her voice
It would sound almost generic without that certain something in the "back" of it you know what I mean were a womans voice will have, not at aftertone, but, a second tone to it with it? She has that.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 10:34 AM

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Originally Posted by kane

It is not my kind of music but I have to say when you hear the top 10 songs on billboard they all sound like this one so I think people would like it and it could find an audience.

That said, if I were producing the song I would get rid of the guy. She is good and while he is okay having him in it seems to take the song from being a good pop song to being more of show tunes kind of thing. Just my 2cents.

Thanks for the Advice, I agree. He is one of the few that is signed with Interscope/Myspace and is a friend of mine so we thought the first one of her songs would be cool with them together. But the other songs would be her solo and aiming towards some dance tracks.

stickyfingerz · 10-25-2008, 10:42 AM

Pretty much radio ready. I still have my fingerz in the music industry here in Nashville. I wouldn't blow smoke up your ass if I thought it was bad. Its really good. One thing I felt you could add was over the intro music one of two things.

A. Have her do some whispering type talk / singing or
B. Have the guy do some sort of a rap style intro.

Its seriously a very awesome song. Who wrote it btw?

CaptainHowdy · 10-25-2008, 10:46 AM

Great voice ... not my cup of tea but sounds really promising!

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 10:46 AM

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Originally Posted by stickyfingerz

Pretty much radio ready. I still have my fingerz in the music industry here in Nashville. I wouldn't blow smoke up your ass if I thought it was bad. Its really good. One thing I felt you could add was over the intro music one of two things.

A. Have her do some whispering type talk / singing or
B. Have the guy do some sort of a rap style intro.

Its seriously a very awesome song. Who wrote it btw?

Thanks man, that is good to hear. She wrote majority of it on the spot at the studio, and the Jeremy dude and the producer added a few things. I will definitely pass on the suggestions. (Song was actually written about me so I guess I'm the ghost. lol)

You must have your hands full in Nashville. Lots of talented people there.

aico · 10-25-2008, 10:48 AM

Have her team up with Angela Taylor, and you'll have the sexiest girl band out there.

stickyfingerz · 10-25-2008, 10:56 AM

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Originally Posted by CyberAge-Dave

Thanks man, that is good to hear. She wrote majority of it on the spot at the studio, and the Jeremy dude and the producer added a few things. I will definitely pass on the suggestions. (Song was actually written about me so I guess I'm the ghost. lol)

You must have your hands full in Nashville. Lots of talented people there.

New people come in on the bus everyday hehe.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 11:03 AM

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Originally Posted by MrMaxwell

I love her voice
It would sound almost generic without that certain something in the "back" of it you know what I mean were a womans voice will have, not at aftertone, but, a second tone to it with it? She has that.

I totally understand, good advice. Thanks,

Lee · 10-25-2008, 11:40 AM

I listened to the first part and got my impressions. It sounded like a lot of the stuff that charts today, which too be honest isnt my cup of tea. However I will say that if you played that to me with say two other similar songs in that genre then I myself wouldnt be able to tell which are the two "established" performers and your wife, so its good in that respect.

A sterling effort just not to my personal taste.

qxm · 10-25-2008, 11:45 AM

... ur wife might be onto something there

Basic_man · 10-25-2008, 11:46 AM

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Originally Posted by baddog

Not really my style of music, but the thing that I noticed was the background orchestra music was way to loud for her. Overwhelming.

Same for me.

Expecting this, this really sound like a big production.

Also, in some parts of the song, the sound of her voice have some annoying "digitalized" effet on it... I would reduce the effet/remove it.

justinsain · 10-25-2008, 12:07 PM

I listened to it a few times and I must say it's really nice. She defiantly has the potential

All she needs is the right people behind her and she will do well.

As for the song a few things stuck out for me. One is I liked the fact that the guy also sang and didn't rap his part. I didn't like the like in " you're like a ghost to me " and would maybe try " you're a ghost to me " instead. I like Stickey's idea about the song starting with her whispering something and the end seemed unfinished as if it were cutoff. Maybe finish it off with him whispering something too.

That's my initial reaction but what the hell do I know

I will say again that it's really good, very commercial ( sell well ) and worthy of doing an album.

Manowar · 10-25-2008, 12:11 PM

she has a great voice!

on a side note, i miss ball'r records

RyanL · 10-25-2008, 12:11 PM

Great voice

makefuckingmoney · 10-25-2008, 12:29 PM

no offense but i think its horrible.

maybe see if disney can put it in like alladin 4 or something..

very kid/disney/cartoon romance sounding

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 12:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by justinsain

I listened to it a few times and I must say it's really nice. She defiantly has the potential

All she needs is the right people behind her and she will do well.

As for the song a few things stuck out for me. One is I liked the fact that the guy also sang and didn't rap his part. I didn't like the like in " you're like a ghost to me " and would maybe try " you're a ghost to me " instead. I like Stickey's idea about the song starting with her whispering something and the end seemed unfinished as if it were cutoff. Maybe finish it off with him whispering something too.

That's my initial reaction but what the hell do I know

I will say again that it's really good, very commercial ( sell well ) and worthy of doing an album.

You wrote this as you've done a few albums. Nice job.

Thanks for taking the time to listen to it and giving your thoughts. I may just hire you for her next few songs.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 12:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Basic_man

Same for me.

Expecting this, this really sound like a big production.

Also, in some parts of the song, the sound of her voice have some annoying "digitalized" effet on it... I would reduce the effet/remove it.

Thanks, It seems most of the new songs played right now have that digitalized affects to it. But I agree, I think they are getting carried away with it.

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 12:40 PM

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Originally Posted by makefuckingmoney

no offense but i think its horrible.

maybe see if disney can put it in like alladin 4 or something..

very kid/disney/cartoon romance sounding

If Disney picks it up, that's a nice Payday.

That's a great compliment. Thanks.

How much is Miley Cyrus worth???? A lot!

Semi-Retired-Dave · 10-25-2008, 12:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Manowar

she has a great voice!

on a side note, i miss ball'r records

Thanks on the Voice part,
I don't miss Ball'r Records.

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 10-25-2008, 01:34 PM

Good voice, the style of music is seriously outdated though.
The song would have got air time in the early 90's with a good label.

Have her drop R&B Soul/NRG it's worse than the bubonic plague in music these days ( As in the death of talented voices ) and look into Down Tempo, or I know...

Find a good guitarist like me and produce something Hard Rock/blues

Emil · 10-25-2008, 01:50 PM

I wish we could hear her real voice

ladida · 10-25-2008, 02:01 PM

Make her famous, she'll leave you.

Not bad song tho, but her voice seems to have been postproduced alot.

WebairGerard · 10-25-2008, 02:02 PM

not my style of music but she sounds great. as good if not better than many in that genre of music. should do an album for sure! best of luck to her!! good hook too!

webair · 10-25-2008, 02:04 PM

Shes awesome thats definitely marketable bro...great production as well i think her voice fits in perfectly in the pocket

Enemator · 10-25-2008, 02:06 PM

Honest points:

- The song is VERY 90's
- Everybody goes on about the "awesome voice" but all I hear is a voice that's been run through a computer 10 times kinda like Cher's "Believe"

The song becomes a little bit catchier midway. Not a bad song but the mixing of her voice just ruins it.

-edit- speaking of Cher's "Beleive", that's kinda the same time period as I'd rate your song. Similar style even.

StickyGreen · 10-25-2008, 02:19 PM

Synthesizing vocals is the cool thing to do these days, you didn't know? lol

Enemator · 10-25-2008, 02:23 PM

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Originally Posted by StickyGreen

Synthesizing vocals is the cool thing to do these days, you didn't know? lol

Oh I know. It is also a sign that the voice isn't good enough to carry the song on its own.

10-24-2008, 11:15 PM	#1
Semi-Retired-Dave Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: LA Posts: 11,190	So...I convinced my wife to get in the studio and record her first single... I would love to hear your feedbacks. I'm thinking about doing a complete album but I also want to focus on kids. So for her touring right now is out of the question but having an an album is the one thing she is missing from her list of things to do in her lifetime. Everything else has pretty much been accomplished. I may have to fire up one of my old labels because there is already talks about this song getting radio play. Let me know your thoughts. Speak your mind. I'm sure not everyone is into her style of music. If you don't like it, what would you change? I'll make sure to pass the info to her. Also, if you like it, she has it on her myspace page, you can add it to your page from there. Thanks for taking the time to listen to it. Ghost - Featuring Jeremy Greene __________________ Support a Good Cause

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Slick Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Houghton, MI Posts: 7,338	Hey Dave, I checked out the song and I like it, the chorus is great, very chatchy, I could picture that song on the radio.

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Bojangles Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 5,419	Not my type of music... But, for this type of music the chorus is definitely catchy. I could picture this song being played on the radio as well.

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kane Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: portland, OR Posts: 20,684	It is not my kind of music but I have to say when you hear the top 10 songs on billboard they all sound like this one so I think people would like it and it could find an audience. That said, if I were producing the song I would get rid of the guy. She is good and while he is okay having him in it seems to take the song from being a good pop song to being more of show tunes kind of thing. Just my 2cents.

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munki Do Fun Shit. Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: OC Posts: 13,393	I was diggin it... a lil heavy on the background fluff. Killer voice, layoff the effects a bit and eq a bit more and you've got a serious single on your hands there. __________________ “I have the simplest tastes. I am always satisfied with the best.” -Oscar Wilde

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stickyfingerz Doin fine Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 24,983	Pretty much radio ready. I still have my fingerz in the music industry here in Nashville. I wouldn't blow smoke up your ass if I thought it was bad. Its really good. One thing I felt you could add was over the intro music one of two things. A. Have her do some whispering type talk / singing or B. Have the guy do some sort of a rap style intro. Its seriously a very awesome song. Who wrote it btw?

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Lee Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Kernow Posts: 2,977	I listened to the first part and got my impressions. It sounded like a lot of the stuff that charts today, which too be honest isnt my cup of tea. However I will say that if you played that to me with say two other similar songs in that genre then I myself wouldnt be able to tell which are the two "established" performers and your wife, so its good in that respect. A sterling effort just not to my personal taste.

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justinsain Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 3,374	I listened to it a few times and I must say it's really nice. She defiantly has the potential All she needs is the right people behind her and she will do well. As for the song a few things stuck out for me. One is I liked the fact that the guy also sang and didn't rap his part. I didn't like the like in " you're like a ghost to me " and would maybe try " you're a ghost to me " instead. I like Stickey's idea about the song starting with her whispering something and the end seemed unfinished as if it were cutoff. Maybe finish it off with him whispering something too. That's my initial reaction but what the hell do I know I will say again that it's really good, very commercial ( sell well ) and worthy of doing an album.

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