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iroc409 · 01-12-2003, 02:25 AM

ok, posted one of my first gallery submissions, just wanted some opinions. please bear in mind i'm still pretty green with all this stuff. i want honest opinions, preferrably not just telling me how horrible i am. trying to be constructive here

idahoes gallery

Roald · 01-12-2003, 02:31 AM

You are horrible

iroc409 · 01-12-2003, 02:33 AM

aaaaaahhh! you're terrible! you've DESTROYED my will to go on in the porn industry!

ok, dramatics aside, but what do you think about hte gallery?

x3guide · 01-12-2003, 02:34 AM

"just cause they were raised in a barn doesn't mean they won't screw your brains out"

KRL · 01-12-2003, 02:35 AM

First off get rid of that conservative gray backround. Next fix the type fonts. They got a smudgy look. And last redo your logo.

iroc409 · 01-12-2003, 02:37 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by KRL
First off get rid of that conservative gray backround. Next fix the type fonts. They got a smudgy look. And last redo your logo.

the smudgy look was intended, because i didn't have a font that i was in the mood for at the time, but i can see where it might be uninteresting. the main logo isn't my creation (not my site). but, what's wrong with it? i appreciate the pointers.

Lethal · 01-12-2003, 02:40 AM

260 pixel thumbs? Maybe one or two big ones to provide focus, but...

and where are you giving me any reason ot click on your links? Every text link has to be a strong call to action with an implied benefit.

Kill yourself now, there is no hope.

Mutt · 01-12-2003, 02:40 AM

the logo is fine, the font is fine. everybody's a critic.

iroc409 · 01-12-2003, 02:41 AM

ponder...

pornisgood · 01-12-2003, 02:58 AM

Hot content i should say first off

but i just busted a nut for free. I dont think showing alot of pussy is good tits is fine but some hot shaved pussy spread on the bed is waiting for me to wip it out

Pointless · 01-12-2003, 03:13 AM

image size is pretty big most surfers are still on dial-up,

i try keep them as close to 30k as i can

T[H]C · 01-12-2003, 03:16 AM

I think that the thumbs are too big also. The gallery is simple, however, it is also boring.

T[H]C · 01-12-2003, 03:19 AM

There is absolutly no design is this page whatsoever, its a group of gigantic thumbs surrounding a larger add. with some fucking lame text and a pathetic banner at the bottom.

PostWhore · 01-12-2003, 03:20 AM

nasty

Rex · 01-12-2003, 05:28 AM

looks like shit man

Pointless · 01-12-2003, 05:40 AM

also it looks alot better if you put a border around the thumbs

01-12-2003, 02:25 AM	#1
iroc409 Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: midwest side, yo Posts: 4,728	*need some opinions, but not too* many** ok, posted one of my first gallery submissions, just wanted some opinions. please bear in mind i'm still pretty green with all this stuff. i want honest opinions, preferrably not just telling me how horrible i am. trying to be constructive here idahoes gallery __________________ <a href="http://www.iroc409.com/"><img src="http://www.iroc409.com/adv/120x60.gif" border=0></a> icq: 1 7 6 4 2 0 9 6 0 Gallery templates for ONLY $25! w00t!

01-12-2003, 02:31 AM	#2
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01-12-2003, 02:33 AM	#3
iroc409 Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: midwest side, yo Posts: 4,728	aaaaaahhh! you're terrible! you've DESTROYED my will to go on in the porn industry! ok, dramatics aside, but what do you think about hte gallery? __________________ <a href="http://www.iroc409.com/"><img src="http://www.iroc409.com/adv/120x60.gif" border=0></a> icq: 1 7 6 4 2 0 9 6 0 Gallery templates for ONLY $25! w00t!

01-12-2003, 02:34 AM	#4
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01-12-2003, 02:35 AM	#5
KRL Entrepreneur Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 31,429	First off get rid of that conservative gray backround. Next fix the type fonts. They got a smudgy look. And last redo your logo. __________________ If you would like to develop your domains, you can lease inexpensive foreign labor from the leaders in the field at iWebmasters.com TO LOWER YOUR COSTS AND INCREASE YOUR PRODUCTION! * * * * * * * * * * * * Domains Adult News KRL's Newsletter Biz Tips Just Listed Domains

01-12-2003, 02:40 AM	#7
Lethal Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 494	260 pixel thumbs? Maybe one or two big ones to provide focus, but... and where are you giving me any reason ot click on your links? Every text link has to be a strong call to action with an implied benefit. Kill yourself now, there is no hope.

01-12-2003, 02:40 AM	#8
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	the logo is fine, the font is fine. everybody's a critic. __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

01-12-2003, 02:41 AM	#9
iroc409 Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: midwest side, yo Posts: 4,728	ponder... __________________ <a href="http://www.iroc409.com/"><img src="http://www.iroc409.com/adv/120x60.gif" border=0></a> icq: 1 7 6 4 2 0 9 6 0 Gallery templates for ONLY $25! w00t!

01-12-2003, 02:58 AM	#10
pornisgood So Fucking Banned Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 70	Hot content i should say first off but i just busted a nut for free. I dont think showing alot of pussy is good tits is fine but some hot shaved pussy spread on the bed is waiting for me to wip it out

01-12-2003, 03:13 AM	#11
Pointless Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 2,142	image size is pretty big most surfers are still on dial-up, i try keep them as close to 30k as i can

01-12-2003, 03:16 AM	#12
T[H]C Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Tempe, AZ Posts: 162	I think that the thumbs are too big also. The gallery is simple, however, it is also boring.

01-12-2003, 03:19 AM	#13
T[H]C Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Tempe, AZ Posts: 162	There is absolutly no design is this page whatsoever, its a group of gigantic thumbs surrounding a larger add. with some fucking lame text and a pathetic banner at the bottom.

01-12-2003, 03:20 AM	#14
PostWhore Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 4,720	nasty __________________ Ask me how to monetize with adult traffic!

01-12-2003, 05:28 AM	#15
Rex Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: ohio Posts: 2,241	looks like shit man __________________ I don't own RexMag anymore.

01-12-2003, 05:40 AM	#16
Pointless Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 2,142	also it looks alot better if you put a border around the thumbs