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BennyX · 10-08-2008, 05:33 AM

http://www.my-pornbase.com

please take a look and write me a critic thx alot for your help

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georgiaasphalt · 10-08-2008, 06:27 AM

Overall, a nice layout. Just a few comments:

1. To me, things feel too bunched up. I would give things a little more space around them to help visually separate things or use some boxes/dividers.

2. In the right column, I would put the "1. partner gallery" below the thumbnail and use more descriptive text instead of "partner gallery". I'm guessing it's a placeholder right now.

3. In the header graphic, perhaps create some kind of cool background instead it being transparent; have the toon's head be above the box so she's not totally inside it; put a reflection below her to give it some depth.

Something quick and dirty:
georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase.jpg

BennyX · 10-08-2008, 07:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by georgiaasphalt

Overall, a nice layout. Just a few comments:

1. To me, things feel too bunched up. I would give things a little more space around them to help visually separate things or use some boxes/dividers.

2. In the right column, I would put the "1. partner gallery" below the thumbnail and use more descriptive text instead of "partner gallery". I'm guessing it's a placeholder right now.

3. In the header graphic, perhaps create some kind of cool background instead it being transparent; have the toon's head be above the box so she's not totally inside it; put a reflection below her to give it some depth.

Something quick and dirty:
georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase.jpg

-> 3. wow this header is perfect how do you do that? fucking nice

-> 2. Good idear i am working on it right now

-> 1. what do you mean with bunched up? witch spaces?

thx for this nice critic

Kelli58 · 10-08-2008, 07:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by georgiaasphalt

Overall, a nice layout. Just a few comments:
Something quick and dirty:
georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase.jpg

Holy cow you actually made something for the guy?

Very impressive!

mona · 10-08-2008, 09:14 AM

I agree with GeorgiaAsphault (cool header btw, nice how it looks like her hand is wrapped around it!) that it is a little cluttered...So, how do you solve that?

Well, you could increase the spacing, and play with coloring. The yellow color is used quite a bit, and it begins to "run" into each other, making it hard for your eyes to focus. Yellow is generally used as an "attention getter," so it's kinda hard for the surfer to focus.

Also, how exactly does the "number viewing" work? Better to have nothing, or some number, than 0.

Overall, I think it'll be a winner!

Are you going for any particular niche???

georgiaasphalt · 10-08-2008, 12:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

-> 3. wow this header is perfect how do you do that? fucking nice

Just copying and pasting portions of her body over the horizontal bar and erasing parts of the layers so the bar runs into her. Because I don't have the original files you can see the background tile is messed up. Plus the reflection isn't ideal. You should scoot her down so she's laying directly on top of the gray area, then move the reflection down so it's completely on the gray.

It would've taken too long to do without the original files. This was just to give you an idea

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

-> 1. what do you mean with bunched up? witch spaces?

thx for this nice critic

Quote:

Originally Posted by mona_klixxx

...So, how do you solve that?

Well, you could increase the spacing, and play with coloring. The yellow color is used quite a bit, and it begins to "run" into each other, making it hard for your eyes to focus. Yellow is generally used as an "attention getter," so it's kinda hard for the surfer to focus.

Very true! Right along the lines of what I was thinking! To expand a little further, you've got those 110x150 thumbnails in between the rows of the 3 larger thumbnails - put more space above and below the row of 110x150 thumbs. Maybe put them in a different colored box.

I would also put a different colored box behind the right column to separate it a bit more and put a little more spacing between below the "free hardcore" and the thumbnail below it. Maybe make the background color a dark gray and switch the text color to white. Pull the gray from one of the shapes in your background tile.

For example, look at espn.com. Though it's a 3 column layout, the far right column is black, whereas the other two (or for your site the one) columns are white and tan.

Quote:

Originally Posted by mona_klixxx

I agree with GeorgiaAsphault (cool header btw, nice how it looks like her hand is wrapped around it!) that it is a little cluttered

Thanks

BennyX · 10-09-2008, 03:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mona_klixxx

I agree with GeorgiaAsphault (cool header btw, nice how it looks like her hand is wrapped around it!) that it is a little cluttered...So, how do you solve that?

Well, you could increase the spacing, and play with coloring. The yellow color is used quite a bit, and it begins to "run" into each other, making it hard for your eyes to focus. Yellow is generally used as an "attention getter," so it's kinda hard for the surfer to focus.

Also, how exactly does the "number viewing" work? Better to have nothing, or some number, than 0.

Overall, I think it'll be a winner!

Are you going for any particular niche???

first of all thx alot for you nice answer

Header is my problem i cant do this alone :-(

i changed now the color a little bit i hope it works better
the number stuff is kicked out you are right..
yes i will do any niche in the future

BennyX · 10-09-2008, 04:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by georgiaasphalt

Just copying and pasting portions of her body over the horizontal bar and erasing parts of the layers so the bar runs into her. Because I don't have the original files you can see the background tile is messed up. Plus the reflection isn't ideal. You should scoot her down so she's laying directly on top of the gray area, then move the reflection down so it's completely on the gray.

It would've taken too long to do without the original files. This was just to give you an idea

Very true! Right along the lines of what I was thinking! To expand a little further, you've got those 110x150 thumbnails in between the rows of the 3 larger thumbnails - put more space above and below the row of 110x150 thumbs. Maybe put them in a different colored box.

I would also put a different colored box behind the right column to separate it a bit more and put a little more spacing between below the "free hardcore" and the thumbnail below it. Maybe make the background color a dark gray and switch the text color to white. Pull the gray from one of the shapes in your background tile.

For example, look at espn.com. Though it's a 3 column layout, the far right column is black, whereas the other two (or for your site the one) columns are white and tan.

Thanks

Thx alot for this nice answer:

1. this header is perfect please send it me :-)
i added a blank between row of 110x150 thumbs.

i changed also the background but i dont find the right color :-(

ez12 · 10-09-2008, 05:14 AM

I would ad categories. This makes it easier for the visitor to go to his niche and for you to increase your chances on a sale.

Just my 2cts

BennyX · 10-09-2008, 06:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ez12

I would ad categories. This makes it easier for the visitor to go to his niche and for you to increase your chances on a sale.

Just my 2cts

ok but where my space is small :-(
and i have allways tags under the Monster Pic

georgiaasphalt · 10-09-2008, 09:11 AM

much, much better!

I see what you mean about the colors. For something like this I lean towards keeping "content" colors (box backgrounds) neutral (black, white, grays) so the focus is in on the photos. It also helps keeps the site from appearing cluttered and overpowering (IMHO). I uploaded a screen shot with altered colors and some minor comments. Easier to explain this way.

georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase-comments.jpg

I do like the idea of categories. Even with the tags below the monster thumbnails, you can make each row the same category and add a header above them. But categories can get a bit tedious if you don't keep them broad enough. This is a tough call. Could go either way.

Here is a better version of the header. I was bored so I cleaned it up and added a few extra touches.
georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase02.jpg

I've also uploaded the PSD of the header so you (and anyone else interested) can see how I did it. I'll admit, it's a bit clunky how I went about it, so altering certain aspects is more difficult than they should be. But the end result is the same.

georgiaasphalt.com/pbpsd.zip

I know looking at PSD's and talking with other designers is a HUGE help in improving my design skills and knowledge. I'm happy to share!

Hope this helps.

LoveSandra · 10-09-2008, 10:07 AM

Your site looks cool and clean too.
IMHO, i will resize a little bit the large photos.I think the page will load more faster.

BennyX · 10-10-2008, 12:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LoveSandra

Your site looks cool and clean too.
IMHO, i will resize a little bit the large photos.I think the page will load more faster.

i am working on the pics but here is it very fast

BennyX · 10-10-2008, 12:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by georgiaasphalt

much, much better!

I see what you mean about the colors. For something like this I lean towards keeping "content" colors (box backgrounds) neutral (black, white, grays) so the focus is in on the photos. It also helps keeps the site from appearing cluttered and overpowering (IMHO). I uploaded a screen shot with altered colors and some minor comments. Easier to explain this way.

georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase-comments.jpg

I do like the idea of categories. Even with the tags below the monster thumbnails, you can make each row the same category and add a header above them. But categories can get a bit tedious if you don't keep them broad enough. This is a tough call. Could go either way.

Here is a better version of the header. I was bored so I cleaned it up and added a few extra touches.
georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase02.jpg

I've also uploaded the PSD of the header so you (and anyone else interested) can see how I did it. I'll admit, it's a bit clunky how I went about it, so altering certain aspects is more difficult than they should be. But the end result is the same.

georgiaasphalt.com/pbpsd.zip

I know looking at PSD's and talking with other designers is a HUGE help in improving my design skills and knowledge. I'm happy to share!

Hope this helps.

first of all the best header i have ever seen (and i got great feedback (you have talent))

i changed everything but is it not a little bit to much white?

and can i give you a free hardlink or something else for your great help?

thx so much

kahell · 10-10-2008, 01:52 AM

you got a winner logo/header

georgiaasphalt · 10-10-2008, 05:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

first of all the best header i have ever seen (and i got great feedback (you have talent))

Thanks for the compliment!

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

i changed everything but is it not a little bit to much white?

I was struggling with that issue as well. I played around with some simple tricks and other colors, but I kept running back to mamma (the color white) because, to me, adding more color looked too busy. I tried a different color in the box above the jumbo thumb and I felt like it separated it too much from the thumb below. Those 4 boxes are all related and are really a single item, coloring one of the boxes felt like it was taking away from that relationship.

What looked best other than white was using a VERY light color (another light gray, yellow, blue, purple). But I preferred the white because it doesn't compete with the content. It's a judgment call and you should go with what you like best. It should be an easy thing to mess around with and I encourage you to do so.

A couple simple ways to add some more color:

1. Put 1 pixel link borders around some of the thumbnails and change the colors of the links. I don't know how much of a pain in the ass this would be, but you could remove the white box from behind the jumbo thumbnails and just have a 1 or 2 pixel border around them or none at all. To do that you'll need to adjust the width of all the other boxes or resize the thumbnails accordingly.

2. Change the color of the background tile. I'd keep that a dark color, probably purple. When selecting colors, use the header as guide.

By no means am I saying to do that. Just some ideas to play around with.

When selecting colors, they should be from the palette you're using (purple, blue, pink, gray/black). That red and green you're using doesn't really mesh with the color palette you're sportin.

The only other things I would do is put that dark gray box from behind the 110x150 thumbs behind the 120x60 banners too.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

and can i give you a free hardlink or something else for your great help?

Thanks, but that's not necessary

Just happy to help!

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

thx so much

No problemo

VicD · 10-10-2008, 05:37 AM

Looks oke but it's getting displayed wrong in my browser, i use IE
The header is pushing the pics to the left

BennyX · 10-10-2008, 06:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VicD

Looks oke but it's getting displayed wrong in my browser, i use IE
The header is pushing the pics to the left

oh thx alot

big mistake now it should work

BennyX · 10-10-2008, 07:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by georgiaasphalt

Thanks for the compliment!

I was struggling with that issue as well. I played around with some simple tricks and other colors, but I kept running back to mamma (the color white) because, to me, adding more color looked too busy. I tried a different color in the box above the jumbo thumb and I felt like it separated it too much from the thumb below. Those 4 boxes are all related and are really a single item, coloring one of the boxes felt like it was taking away from that relationship.

What looked best other than white was using a VERY light color (another light gray, yellow, blue, purple). But I preferred the white because it doesn't compete with the content. It's a judgment call and you should go with what you like best. It should be an easy thing to mess around with and I encourage you to do so.

A couple simple ways to add some more color:

1. Put 1 pixel link borders around some of the thumbnails and change the colors of the links. I don't know how much of a pain in the ass this would be, but you could remove the white box from behind the jumbo thumbnails and just have a 1 or 2 pixel border around them or none at all. To do that you'll need to adjust the width of all the other boxes or resize the thumbnails accordingly.

2. Change the color of the background tile. I'd keep that a dark color, probably purple. When selecting colors, use the header as guide.

By no means am I saying to do that. Just some ideas to play around with.

When selecting colors, they should be from the palette you're using (purple, blue, pink, gray/black). That red and green you're using doesn't really mesh with the color palette you're sportin.

The only other things I would do is put that dark gray box from behind the 110x150 thumbs behind the 120x60 banners too.

Thanks, but that's not necessary

Just happy to help!

No problemo

thx again for all your infos..
120x60 is changed perfect idear
and you get this hardlink send me your url *hey my site is pagerank 3*

and i dont know i get this background away it works if i make the pic like 250x350 but now all my pics are 230 and i dont know the best height :-(

what do you mean with background tile?

thx for helping

BennyX · 10-15-2008, 02:10 AM

final version is on air.. i hope you like it?

georgiaasphalt · 10-15-2008, 05:57 AM

lookin' good! Good luck with the site!

pornguy · 10-15-2008, 01:36 PM

Looking good. Hit me on ICQ to chat about some SE work you can do on it. Free tips. And I want your ear for some programs to push with the site.

BennyX · 10-16-2008, 03:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pornguy

Looking good. Hit me on ICQ to chat about some SE work you can do on it. Free tips. And I want your ear for some programs to push with the site.

thx alot but how can i add you on icq without icq number?

BennyX · 10-16-2008, 03:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by georgiaasphalt

lookin' good! Good luck with the site!

thx alot you are my personal hero

pornguy · 10-16-2008, 09:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BennyX

thx alot but how can i add you on icq without icq number?

Its in my Sig. 174228679

UniqueMovies · 10-16-2008, 08:42 PM

Very clean and clear.. love it!

Almost Evil · 10-17-2008, 01:44 AM

Its looking very nice and clean now. And georgiaasphalt, you did an amazing job. Its SO nice to see someone being helpful and going out of their way on here. Very refreshing! Bravo guys!

BennyX · 10-17-2008, 01:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UniqueMovies

Very clean and clear.. love it!

thx alot

BennyX · 10-17-2008, 01:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Almost Evil

Its looking very nice and clean now. And georgiaasphalt, you did an amazing job. Its SO nice to see someone being helpful and going out of their way on here. Very refreshing! Bravo guys!

thx alot i hope i get now more traffic and some cash back :-)

zarkas · 10-17-2008, 02:17 AM

Looks pretty nice now.
Also some pretty nice babes you got there

BennyX · 10-17-2008, 03:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zarkas

Looks pretty nice now.
Also some pretty nice babes you got there

thx

somebody has got some soe tips?

georgiaasphalt · 10-17-2008, 07:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Almost Evil

Its looking very nice and clean now. And georgiaasphalt, you did an amazing job. Its SO nice to see someone being helpful and going out of their way on here. Very refreshing! Bravo guys!

Thanks! It was my pleasure helping out.

blonda80 · 10-19-2008, 02:07 AM

looks awesome!

BennyX · 10-29-2008, 01:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blonda80

looks awesome!

thx alot some more tipps

buildingblocks · 10-30-2008, 03:53 PM

Looks aweasome! gj

WZRogeR · 10-31-2008, 01:57 PM

hmm, looks good

BennyX · 11-01-2008, 04:05 AM

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Originally Posted by WZRogeR

hmm, looks good

thx alot

lucas131 · 11-01-2008, 06:41 AM

I like the header, looks good, I would make smaller thumbs.

BennyX · 11-02-2008, 10:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lucas131

I like the header, looks good, I would make smaller thumbs.

thx but i love this big thumbs and bookmarkers too

10-08-2008, 05:33 AM	#1
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10-08-2008, 06:27 AM	#2
georgiaasphalt Registered User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Baltimore, MD Posts: 64	Overall, a nice layout. Just a few comments: 1. To me, things feel too bunched up. I would give things a little more space around them to help visually separate things or use some boxes/dividers. 2. In the right column, I would put the "1. partner gallery" below the thumbnail and use more descriptive text instead of "partner gallery". I'm guessing it's a placeholder right now. 3. In the header graphic, perhaps create some kind of cool background instead it being transparent; have the toon's head be above the box so she's not totally inside it; put a reflection below her to give it some depth. Something quick and dirty: georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase.jpg __________________ Make money with the official affiliate program for adult star Nikki Benz. ~ www.nikkibenzcash.com ~ ~ www.nikkibenz.com ~

10-09-2008, 05:14 AM	#9
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10-09-2008, 09:11 AM	#11
georgiaasphalt Registered User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Baltimore, MD Posts: 64	much, much better! I see what you mean about the colors. For something like this I lean towards keeping "content" colors (box backgrounds) neutral (black, white, grays) so the focus is in on the photos. It also helps keeps the site from appearing cluttered and overpowering (IMHO). I uploaded a screen shot with altered colors and some minor comments. Easier to explain this way. georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase-comments.jpg I do like the idea of categories. Even with the tags below the monster thumbnails, you can make each row the same category and add a header above them. But categories can get a bit tedious if you don't keep them broad enough. This is a tough call. Could go either way. Here is a better version of the header. I was bored so I cleaned it up and added a few extra touches. georgiaasphalt.com/images/gfy/my-pornbase02.jpg I've also uploaded the PSD of the header so you (and anyone else interested) can see how I did it. I'll admit, it's a bit clunky how I went about it, so altering certain aspects is more difficult than they should be. But the end result is the same. georgiaasphalt.com/pbpsd.zip I know looking at PSD's and talking with other designers is a HUGE help in improving my design skills and knowledge. I'm happy to share! Hope this helps. __________________ Make money with the official affiliate program for adult star Nikki Benz. ~ www.nikkibenzcash.com ~ ~ www.nikkibenz.com ~

10-10-2008, 01:52 AM	#15
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10-08-2008, 09:14 AM	#5
mona Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Mona = "female monkey" in Spanish Posts: 1,940	I agree with GeorgiaAsphault (cool header btw, nice how it looks like her hand is wrapped around it!) that it is a little cluttered...So, how do you solve that? Well, you could increase the spacing, and play with coloring. The yellow color is used quite a bit, and it begins to "run" into each other, making it hard for your eyes to focus. Yellow is generally used as an "attention getter," so it's kinda hard for the surfer to focus. Also, how exactly does the "number viewing" work? Better to have nothing, or some number, than 0. Overall, I think it'll be a winner! Are you going for any particular niche???

10-09-2008, 10:07 AM	#12
LoveSandra So Fucking Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Just Blow Me Posts: 10,551	Your site looks cool and clean too. IMHO, i will resize a little bit the large photos.I think the page will load more faster.

10-10-2008, 05:37 AM	#17
VicD ICQ: 304-611-162 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Masterdam Posts: 13,245	Looks oke but it's getting displayed wrong in my browser, i use IE The header is pushing the pics to the left

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10-15-2008, 05:57 AM	#21
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10-15-2008, 01:36 PM	#22
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10-16-2008, 08:42 PM	#26
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10-17-2008, 01:44 AM	#27
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10-30-2008, 03:53 PM	#35
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10-31-2008, 01:57 PM	#36
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11-01-2008, 06:41 AM	#38
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